FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zombie Wasteland part ONE]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Fairly well made. I'm not a fan of zombie movies, but this one was actually pretty good, since it was well-presented, and leaves room for a sequel. In fact, this was more of a trailer, but still good. The music went well with the emotion that was felt from the voice acting. Set a sad mood, and makes me want to watch a second part.

^^Needs Improving^^
The art could use some improving. Learn to use some shading effects in order to make the characters appear more realistic. As I said, I would have called this more of a trailer, as that is what it really seems to me. It started and ended, and had the imagery that I would expect to see while sitting in a movie theater.

SCUD14 responds:

thanks for that! More and more people have been relating this flash to a trailer, so i guess thats what it is =D. I wil lwork on shading for the next part, mainly because thatll be mostly fbf, wheras this one was symbols as characters.

[Test Your Mighty Might]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It was a quick load and good for a quick laugh. People exploding under extreme stress always seems to make me laugh for some reason. I guess it was funny how you went from the intense MK music to that rather silly ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just a single joke. I guess this sort of thing needs to exist on NG, but I think if you had made this longer with some more content it would have been really good.

[Enter Frenzy]

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^^Good Points^^
I'd have to say this is one of the better animated movies I've seen from you. The joke was kind of funny, and I guess for what was offered in this, the length wasn't bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly, I was hoping this would be longer. When it ended I said "That's it?" I definitely think you cut this short. You basically focused on the one joke and did nothing else with this. Overall, not bad though.

Frenzy responds:

Sorry about the length, my Flash program was running slowly and I thought it would crash any minute. Thanks for the review!

PS Some character graphics done by Element.

[Cosmos Chaos]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This was a very impressive movie to say the least. The animations were excellent. As you said, one can definitely see how you've improved from the beginning to the end. Very nice FBF animations to make the three dimensional effects, and great use of camera throughout. Music was great, and lots of action. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
This felt kind of distant....I felt it would be a lot better if it wasn't just constant action. We could get to know the characters and know more about this world, and it would make viewing this more interesting and infatuating.

[The Causes]

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^^Good Points^^
Quite a powerful cow if you ask me, to be having crap that smells that bad and potent. Storyline was kind of weird, as that is all that happened, but I guess it was kind of entertaining. Nice job on the music and sound effects, I think they really made this look better.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, nothing really that interesting storyline-wise. A bit random, which isn't bad, but the ending really wasn't satisfying to me.

Imacow responds:

Thanks,for the review.

Storylines are overrated.

[Myth]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Pretty neat movie you made. I think if you finished it, it could be pretty popular and get a much higher score. It's neat how it looks like it's on an old scroll or something, and the hand drawings go well with this. Interesting storyline too, overall nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not a big fan of unfinished works, so finish this. Also, I think you should have put subtitles in, or spoken a bit clearer. Sometimes things are hard to hear.

[Just Rad]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, this was kind of neat to watch. There were some nice drawings in here and good animations as well. Some talent was shown throughout this movie. Good music choices too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really sure whether I really like this or not. It was very repetitive with very quick, looping animations. Some of them were even from some of your other movies, and since I haven't seen them all, many of them could have been taken from your others.

ShortMonkey responds:

I took no parts off flashes on Newgrounds onto here.... but yes, I have used some graphics from other flashes in unfinished sequels. ;-)

[Browser Battles]

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^^Good Points^^
This was pretty good. The voice overs were nicely done, as was the lip syncing. Graphically this was pretty nice, as you used a lot of v-cam effects to make this more interesting to watch. Some good jokes and some nice graphics to go along with that.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really get the ending, but I guess that's mostly my fault, eh?

ShortMonkey responds:

The ending when IE said "I was designed by Microsoft" was like saying "I'm shit" because it is. =D

[Goblin Keeper]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Gee, I thought this was pretty well done. It was mostly in the storyline of course. The fighting between the Goblin Keeper and the Goblin's was very entertaining throughout, with lots of funny stuff going on there. The ending was rather funny as well. What was with that guy with the weird face?

^^Needs Improving^^
It's pretty long, but I still think that the filesize was a bit too big for this. Definitely could use some audio optimization.