FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lilium]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
That was a very enticing movie you made. I think the music was perfect. It sounds very dark, and the "Shadow" character of course mirrors this quite well. The drawings were very detailed and looked good. I feel that the storyline was extremely interesting, and I thought it was a very fun movie to watch. Leaves me with a raised eyebrow, but I applaud you.

^^Needs Improving^^
There really wasn't a whole lot of animation in the characters. Just large tweens and camera movement.

[ORMAN]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty cool. The graphics were pretty nice, with the shading and really close scenes. The storyline was pretty good, and I would like to see a sequel, though it doesn't look likely.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not very long. I think you could have continued this for a little while longer and still have it be pretty good. I especially say this since the sequel still hasn't come in over two years.

[The fall of the samurai]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I'm really quite impressed with this movie. I think that the music really made this more intense and got the viewer into the storyline and watching this. You also did a very nice job on using a lot of different camera views and effects to make this more interesting than a linear movie with a single camera angle. The ending was very good, I'm glad I watched this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations could use some fine tuning, even though they are really good. Framerate seems like it is a little slow.

[Blort and Flitz]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Kind of cute. I thought the dedication at the end was rather strange, but still funny and made it more personal. Animations weren't bad. At least you made this somewhat interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little boring to me. Sorry, I don't like making noises with my mouth, but either way, you still could have animated a bit more, and maybe done a few more sound effects than just the one for each character.

[Over the Rainbow]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I think the strong point to this animation would have to be the animations. They were very smooth and had a realistic feel to them. Lots of fighting in this, action packed. I was really most enticed by the music though, I found the song very neat.

^^Needs Improving^^
Basically the same thing I say about most of these stick fighting movies. They always seem to be better when you zoom in on some fight scenes, rather than be zoomed out the whole time.

[Princess Azumanga]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Decent movie here. It's interesting to see all of the very detailed art made completely using text characters. The dancing figures were pretty funny, and I liked how you "translated" some of your own lyrics from Japanese.

^^Needs Improving^^
For the first bit of this, it was just one picture followed by some smaller pieces of text. I can't believe that you animated or actually made any of the art here, but if I am wrong, I'm sorry.

[Foamy gets the Kegs]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The artwork was reminiscent of illwillpress's work, which I guess you wanted to do. Uhh...quick loading time and not too long.

^^Needs Improving^^
Foamy's voice was a little bit off, and made it hard to hear what he was saying. Too high pitched and too fast for me to hear. Also, the sound effects in general seemed to be off sync at least a little bit.

[Zombie Wasteland part ONE]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Fairly well made. I'm not a fan of zombie movies, but this one was actually pretty good, since it was well-presented, and leaves room for a sequel. In fact, this was more of a trailer, but still good. The music went well with the emotion that was felt from the voice acting. Set a sad mood, and makes me want to watch a second part.

^^Needs Improving^^
The art could use some improving. Learn to use some shading effects in order to make the characters appear more realistic. As I said, I would have called this more of a trailer, as that is what it really seems to me. It started and ended, and had the imagery that I would expect to see while sitting in a movie theater.

SCUD14 responds:

thanks for that! More and more people have been relating this flash to a trailer, so i guess thats what it is =D. I wil lwork on shading for the next part, mainly because thatll be mostly fbf, wheras this one was symbols as characters.

[Test Your Mighty Might]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It was a quick load and good for a quick laugh. People exploding under extreme stress always seems to make me laugh for some reason. I guess it was funny how you went from the intense MK music to that rather silly ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just a single joke. I guess this sort of thing needs to exist on NG, but I think if you had made this longer with some more content it would have been really good.