FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Billy Zone: Slinky]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I have to say that after the Blues Clues part this was more interesting. It was a little weird, but I found the randomness of a talking slinky to be somewhat amusing.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why did you have the Blues Clues part? It didn't seem to add anything to the storyline and was just weird. Why was he having a seizure anyway? Not really liking that part of this.

[helms deep]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A movie for the battle at Helms Deep...a very interesting idea. Something that I was looking very much forward to seeing. You pretty much took the audio right from the movie, so that was a good base for this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why did you stop right before the battle started? This was very disappointing. However, the animations weren't that good in this, and the battle would have looked a little awkward. Try working on your animations.

[College University pt 10]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Very funny movie. From the opening scene to the ending there was good animations and acting throughout, which made it quite an enjoyable movie. Really nothing else to say except that it was great.

^^Needs Improving^^
The one thing I noticed was that the voice overs of the daredevil fellow sounded a little bit distant. Bad microphone or something.

[Sylvester Meats Tweety]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Decent use of sound effects from the television show. You used them pretty well throughout, though they didn't sound very natural. Needs some background music to cover up the beginnings and end.

^^Needs Improving^^
Predictable to say the least. Not very creative in the way Tweety was killed. Not as good as the other cartoon you made.

[looney dooms - roadrunner]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Hehe, I found it quite funny. Mostly because of the sound effect used when the roadrunner was killed. Sounded very reminiscent of an old cartoon. I like how you kept the original theme, even with the genus/species names.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations weren't too smooth. Definitely work on making the more realistic in your next movies.

[Xenocide]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well, interesting use of sound effects. Not sure I really liked it or not, but I'll put that up here regardless. Not a bad idea of having a cherry and a blueberry to avoid complicated animation and drawing.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, I would improve the animations. The framerate in this movie seemed pretty low, and overall the animations were not smooth. Also, some parts were drawn out too long. Like the guy getting killed with the sword and also the opening title screen.

[Arne the retarded moron]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, there was some decent graphical effects, like the fire and smoke in the cave. Music wasn't too bad either. Seemed to go well with this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly didn't find this too entertaining. It really didn't have a storyline to it. Just this guy getting hurt or into a situation where he would most certainly die, but then just showing up in some other situation. Seemed very disjointed and rushed. Drawings could use a bit of shading to make them look better too.

[Lj/Habbo]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
An interesting story of contradiction and someone being very hypocritical. Drawings were decent, as were the voice overs.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing I didn't like was that the audio wasn't synced to the lip animations at all. Seems like the audio played a bit too early and therefore ended too early to match the lips.