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A movie for the battle at Helms Deep...a very interesting idea. Something that I was looking very much forward to seeing. You pretty much took the audio right from the movie, so that was a good base for this.
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Why did you stop right before the battle started? This was very disappointing. However, the animations weren't that good in this, and the battle would have looked a little awkward. Try working on your animations.
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Very funny movie. From the opening scene to the ending there was good animations and acting throughout, which made it quite an enjoyable movie. Really nothing else to say except that it was great.
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The one thing I noticed was that the voice overs of the daredevil fellow sounded a little bit distant. Bad microphone or something.
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Decent use of sound effects from the television show. You used them pretty well throughout, though they didn't sound very natural. Needs some background music to cover up the beginnings and end.
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Predictable to say the least. Not very creative in the way Tweety was killed. Not as good as the other cartoon you made.
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Hehe, I found it quite funny. Mostly because of the sound effect used when the roadrunner was killed. Sounded very reminiscent of an old cartoon. I like how you kept the original theme, even with the genus/species names.
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Animations weren't too smooth. Definitely work on making the more realistic in your next movies.
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Well, interesting use of sound effects. Not sure I really liked it or not, but I'll put that up here regardless. Not a bad idea of having a cherry and a blueberry to avoid complicated animation and drawing.
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First off, I would improve the animations. The framerate in this movie seemed pretty low, and overall the animations were not smooth. Also, some parts were drawn out too long. Like the guy getting killed with the sword and also the opening title screen.
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Ok, there was some decent graphical effects, like the fire and smoke in the cave. Music wasn't too bad either. Seemed to go well with this.
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Honestly didn't find this too entertaining. It really didn't have a storyline to it. Just this guy getting hurt or into a situation where he would most certainly die, but then just showing up in some other situation. Seemed very disjointed and rushed. Drawings could use a bit of shading to make them look better too.
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An interesting story of contradiction and someone being very hypocritical. Drawings were decent, as were the voice overs.
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The main thing I didn't like was that the audio wasn't synced to the lip animations at all. Seems like the audio played a bit too early and therefore ended too early to match the lips.
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This was interesting to watch. There were a lot of random animations throughout this, and it was pretty cool how you had a gray theme going on throughout. Some strange images that were interesting to look at.
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I really think this was quite random. To me it didn't seem to go with the lyrics or anything. Still an interesting way of setting it up though. You at least made it seem like a music video.
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Honestly this was not that interesting. The music and sound effects went well with this, I suppose, and the premise is kind of cute. However, it's really a boring movie. As you said, not really designed for the NG community at all. Really don't like this that much, as the animation is just the writing. Could have done something more interesting with this.
you are right, i only posted it here to see how it would go on newgrounds, however against all odds, it passed. i was sure it would be blamed, cause its not very intresting, especially cause its in dutch. i can only conclude newgrounds visitors are a odd bread, if you make something with explosions and death, they like it, if you make something with mario(DOESN"T MATTER WHAT:( ) they like it.
and now, i gess i can add to that, that if you trow some collors in it, maybe say that it's dutch, they like it.
Hello there! I'm a student of art, in case you didn't know. Yes, I still need to complete materials for my exam and assignment in the liberal arts and other Arts class. I'm just a old kid with a passion for the arts and communication.
Age 71, Male
Visual Artist
High School
Osaka, Japan
Joined on 7/10/05
helms deep 
College University pt 10 
