FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Suicide is Good!]

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^^Good Points^^
I suppose the drawings weren't that badly done. The old time effect was kind of unique and made this somewhat interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
You know...I watched about sixty seconds of this, then realized that I had no idea what was going on. The voice overs for this were slurred and not very loud at all. I suppose you need to get closer to your microphone and speak a little clearer if you want to entertain people.

[Petey The Pigeon]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, the music was kind of cool. A nice calm beat for a city scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
Predictable and boring to say the least. As soon as I heard bus in a story about a pigeon, I knew what was going to happen. Wasn't done well either. Just randomly gets hit by a bus. Needs more storyline to it or something.

[Ministix]

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^^Good Points^^
There were some good animations in here. I liked the jumping effects and some of the background effects. Nice music too.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's just another stick movie to me. It didn't really have anything unique in it. The animations weren't the best, and there was no storyline, which I think really hurt this overall. Needed a storyline if it's nothing spectacular graphically.

[Short Sheepsketch]

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^^Good Points^^
Sheep like apples...who knew? I thought the music sounded rather cool, and the quick story was good, considering what you wanted to accomplish here.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should make your saw look a little clearer. I thought he threw a dildo at the tree or something. Anyway, could have had a bit more of a storyline and more events taking place of it.

[Mr. Hynes Gets The Gas]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, that was hilarious. Construction ninjas? That's just funny stuff. I thought it was funny how you exaggerated this quite a bit (I hope). Graphics weren't great, but the far-fetched storyline made up for it a bit.

^^Needs Improving^^
Started off really slowly. I was bored until the guy came flying out of the window onto the pavement. Also, maybe some voice overs would be good.

[Suicide Cellphone]

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^^Good Points^^
It's got a good message behind it I suppose. Carried out in a creative and somewhat humorous manner.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think it would have been better as an actual Flash animation. The video was pretty low quality and there wasn't a whole lot actually done in Flash besides the text. Ok, but needs some more work.

[Billy Zone: Slinky]

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^^Good Points^^
I have to say that after the Blues Clues part this was more interesting. It was a little weird, but I found the randomness of a talking slinky to be somewhat amusing.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why did you have the Blues Clues part? It didn't seem to add anything to the storyline and was just weird. Why was he having a seizure anyway? Not really liking that part of this.