FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Deadfight]

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^^Good Points^^
I haven't seen a good sprite movie in quite a while. This one was pretty good, seeing how the animations were very good. I'm impressed with how well the blood and gore were made. Good animations made this much better.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was really surprised that you didn't just finish this in one episode. Seems to me like it would have ended real soon anyway. I guess you could make something longer out of it though. Would watch the second episode if it were ever made.

[Short Sheep Sketch 2]

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^^Good Points^^
Hmm...not really sure if this was better than the first or not. It was definitely longer and had more of a storyline to it. Also, had some good animation in the fight scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly had no idea what was going on. Why were the sheep fighting? Anyway, could use some sound effects. Main thing that bothered me was that the backgrounds didn't go down to the bottom of the screen, so there was white spaces at the top and bottom all the time.

[Suicide is Good!]

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^^Good Points^^
I suppose the drawings weren't that badly done. The old time effect was kind of unique and made this somewhat interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
You know...I watched about sixty seconds of this, then realized that I had no idea what was going on. The voice overs for this were slurred and not very loud at all. I suppose you need to get closer to your microphone and speak a little clearer if you want to entertain people.

[Petey The Pigeon]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, the music was kind of cool. A nice calm beat for a city scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
Predictable and boring to say the least. As soon as I heard bus in a story about a pigeon, I knew what was going to happen. Wasn't done well either. Just randomly gets hit by a bus. Needs more storyline to it or something.

[Ministix]

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^^Good Points^^
There were some good animations in here. I liked the jumping effects and some of the background effects. Nice music too.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's just another stick movie to me. It didn't really have anything unique in it. The animations weren't the best, and there was no storyline, which I think really hurt this overall. Needed a storyline if it's nothing spectacular graphically.

[Short Sheepsketch]

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^^Good Points^^
Sheep like apples...who knew? I thought the music sounded rather cool, and the quick story was good, considering what you wanted to accomplish here.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should make your saw look a little clearer. I thought he threw a dildo at the tree or something. Anyway, could have had a bit more of a storyline and more events taking place of it.

[Mr. Hynes Gets The Gas]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, that was hilarious. Construction ninjas? That's just funny stuff. I thought it was funny how you exaggerated this quite a bit (I hope). Graphics weren't great, but the far-fetched storyline made up for it a bit.

^^Needs Improving^^
Started off really slowly. I was bored until the guy came flying out of the window onto the pavement. Also, maybe some voice overs would be good.

[Suicide Cellphone]

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^^Good Points^^
It's got a good message behind it I suppose. Carried out in a creative and somewhat humorous manner.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think it would have been better as an actual Flash animation. The video was pretty low quality and there wasn't a whole lot actually done in Flash besides the text. Ok, but needs some more work.