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[Ackbar : Spanish]

K

^^Good Points^^
This one was kind of funny. I liked how the conversation was just hola with a bunch of random spanish words like taco and dora the explorer. Fun stuff, and the explosion at the end was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should really consider using Speakonia. Your voice overs just don't sound right.

[Clocks Really Suck Ass]

K

^^Good Points^^
I watched this and wondered exactly how you did it. I am thinking that there is some kind of randomness as to what clock shows up each time, yes? The drawings were very detailed and had lots of shading. I liked the techno beat and voices you used to make this too. Not a bad submission.

^^Needs Improving^^
I notice sometimes a clock will appear twice or even thrice in a row. Could there be no way to fix this?

CrustClock responds:

It's a random script so each time one frame (with one clock in it) is picked each time the clock changes. There will certainly be some sort of way to make sure the last random clock isn't picked again, but to be honest I kinda rushed this out.

Thanks for the + review <3

[The Truth About Stairs]

K

^^Good Points^^
Pretty funny idea, definitely. I enjoyed watching this and thought it was very creative. Your drawings were good, and the script was funny. I thought the voice overs were pretty well done, and the way you varied throughout each step was cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Though the voice overs are well done, they are very low and hard to hear. I had to turn up my volume a tad.

[Lost Collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
My favorite part was Hoogi's. It didn't have the best animation or drawings, but it did have a lot of good stuff in it. It was quite funny, and all the strange text was funny. Overall, a decent flash collab.

^^Needs Improving^^
Queen's wasn't really that funny in my opinion. I also didn't like most of the graphics throughout this. They just look very unprofessional.

Hoogiman responds:

I personally liked the graphics style in Queen's. Oh well, thanks for the feedback. :)

[Ackbar : Anti Clock Day]

K

^^Good Points^^
The sound was the best part about this. Good sound effects and music, and the voice overs weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
Effort was kind of lax on this. It was very short and was pretty hard to follow for me. I didn't like the movie and didn't find it entertaining like some people have.

[Farts on a plane]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is by far one of the best movies you've made so far BBQ. I thought it was hilarious the way you used the actual movie trailer sound clip to make this movie, and the idea of farts on a plane is quite hilarious. Very nice job on this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
For once, I was really hoping to get more out of this. It was really short and I wanted it to be a little longer and to enjoy it more.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

But it was "preview" ;)