FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[We Miss You Pluto]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the music wasn't bad, probably the best thing about this movie. I thought the picture of the little boy was kind of funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really doesn't have a very good storyline. The ending is very sudden and isn't really that funny. I also didn't like all of the buttons. I like to fold my arms when watching a movie, not constantly move around and press buttons. Work on the graphics too.

[Sith Daycare]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty well rounded movie. It's a very good idea, and you added a lot of humor into it. I like how you changed some SW quotes like "I find your lack of silence disturbing". The voice overs were very well done. I though greivous's was the best, since it is just like the movie. Sound effects were well placed too. Overall, a funny movie with lots of entertainment.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations really aren't that good. They weren't that smooth and were quite primitive. Same thing with the drawings. They didn't have much texture to them.

[Ackbar : Spanish]

K

^^Good Points^^
This one was kind of funny. I liked how the conversation was just hola with a bunch of random spanish words like taco and dora the explorer. Fun stuff, and the explosion at the end was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should really consider using Speakonia. Your voice overs just don't sound right.

[Clocks Really Suck Ass]

K

^^Good Points^^
I watched this and wondered exactly how you did it. I am thinking that there is some kind of randomness as to what clock shows up each time, yes? The drawings were very detailed and had lots of shading. I liked the techno beat and voices you used to make this too. Not a bad submission.

^^Needs Improving^^
I notice sometimes a clock will appear twice or even thrice in a row. Could there be no way to fix this?

CrustClock responds:

It's a random script so each time one frame (with one clock in it) is picked each time the clock changes. There will certainly be some sort of way to make sure the last random clock isn't picked again, but to be honest I kinda rushed this out.

Thanks for the + review <3

[The Truth About Stairs]

K

^^Good Points^^
Pretty funny idea, definitely. I enjoyed watching this and thought it was very creative. Your drawings were good, and the script was funny. I thought the voice overs were pretty well done, and the way you varied throughout each step was cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Though the voice overs are well done, they are very low and hard to hear. I had to turn up my volume a tad.

[Lost Collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
My favorite part was Hoogi's. It didn't have the best animation or drawings, but it did have a lot of good stuff in it. It was quite funny, and all the strange text was funny. Overall, a decent flash collab.

^^Needs Improving^^
Queen's wasn't really that funny in my opinion. I also didn't like most of the graphics throughout this. They just look very unprofessional.

Hoogiman responds:

I personally liked the graphics style in Queen's. Oh well, thanks for the feedback. :)

[Ackbar : Anti Clock Day]

K

^^Good Points^^
The sound was the best part about this. Good sound effects and music, and the voice overs weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
Effort was kind of lax on this. It was very short and was pretty hard to follow for me. I didn't like the movie and didn't find it entertaining like some people have.