FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Save The Village]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A pretty quick paced game. You didn't mess around in the beginning, it was really quite difficult. Pretty good animations and simplistic. Good for a quick bit of fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs some sound effects or music or at least something to lighten it up a bit. It seems really empty without some music and sound effects.

[Dress up... Yourself 3 !]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
An excellent web-cam game. I tested it on mine, and it worked just fine. Importing images is a very neat feature as well. Definitely makes this more accessible for most people. Lots of pieces to play with and use. Very fun game.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I can see is importing your own mp3's. When you click the box, it opens downward, and pretty much all of it gets cut off.

[Small White Lymphocyte!]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Probably one of the most creative defense games I've seen in a long while, and it's kind of educational to some extent as well. Very nice graphics and sound effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought you could have made the score/blood/lymph/level bar at the bottom a little bit transparent. Sometimes the germs snuck up on me from behind that and gave me a little less time to react.

[Ultimate Lightsaber Tut.]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
That was a pretty great tutorial. Definitely the best for making lightsabers. You have a ton of detail, and really show off your work in the small sample animation. Something that most people can't produce when they make a tutorial.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's a little bit wordy in my opinion, but it does produce great results.

[Jumping Circle 3 Demo]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Neat concept and game play here. I like how you have to both shoot your enemies and jump from platform to platform. Multi-tasking is pretty hard in this game.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, you fall at only a very slightly faster rate than the platforms lower, so even the smallest slip up or hesitation and it's really hard to recover. Gravity needs to be a bit more realistic. Didn't even feel like playing past level 1 with this problem.

joshuaskillsrobles responds:

Yeah it was hard, but if you keep your eye on the platforms instead of the enemy, you will beat it with ease. The gravity was changed in the real version.

[Ball Ninja]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I like that you added an anti-cheating thing in here, where if you click early you would have to start over.

^^Needs Improving^^
There is a lot wrong with this game. First off, the exclamation point appears in the same spot each time, so the only recourse is to time it perfectly, as you have literally no time to react and click before you are attacked. It's just a bad idea.

[Kingpin Soundboard]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I was a little disappointed that this wasn't related to the movie Kingpin, but it wasn't a bad soundboard. Quite a few sounds, and I could see a good prank call or vent conversation here. All the buttons seemed to work.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should have color coded or seperated them by character or something. There seems to be two people talking in these.

[Arrow Panic]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Neat little avoiding game. The graphics were pretty clean, and the game got progressively harder, and it became very challenging after a few minutes.

^^Needs Improving^^
On the preloader it says avoid the bombs...just weird. Anyway, I think you should be able to duck to instead of just jumping. You should also fall a little quicker. Towards the end it's nearly impossible to dodge do to this.

[Happy BDay Dude]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Interesting...an online birthday cake. It was neat how you had to do all of the steps, including light the candles, make a wish, and clean up at the end. Good graphics and sound effects to go along with this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Maybe with some advanced AS you could integrate an option to choose how many candles were on the cake or to change the name to make it more personal.

[Sonic scene creator.]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A lot of different sprites and items to put into the scene and play around with. I like how they regenerated themselves when you picked one up, and also it was cool how some of them were animated.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was only one background, and it wasn't a very interesting one. Very small and cramped. Not very good for making an intricate scene. Should definitely have at least a few different backgrounds.