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^^Good Points^^
A few more sound clips were added to this one. A few interesting ones here.
^^Needs Improving^^
It really doesn't add a whole lot to the first one. And since you submitted it so close in time to the other, you probably coudl have just edited the first one with this instead of submitting a whole new one. And it's really silly that you only have four quotes from townspeople. That is entirely not enough.