FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dress The King!]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The artwork was really cool. I liked the subtle white noise worked into the entire thing. Some cool music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics were nice, but very intense. Extreme lag on high quality. There weren't a whole lot of items on here, could have definitely added a few more. Also, compress your music or take some out. No reason to have a 5MB dressup game.

[OLD stick mini game]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The sound effects and music weren't too bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics were pretty bad. Looks like you have the framerate set really low, which makes for jumpy animations. Also, had no idea what was going on most of the time, and clicking decisions was just random for me. Also, make the buttons larger, not just text.

[Subject : Saddam Hussein]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I've played a ton of assassin games, and this one is one of the better ones. It was actually kind of fun to play, seeing how it was kind of difficult to hit the guy, but not because of bad detection or low framerate. Lots of different things you gotta do to kill him too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Still, not too challenging. You can't get attacked by him or his minions, which makes it a bit too easy for my tastes.

[Hit Baseballs]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Very cool graphics. Kind of cute how there is a cat playing as the batter. Overall a pretty cool game. I like the scoring system too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Moves WAY too slow. You have to wait like 20-30 seconds between each pitch. The pitches move at a really slow speed, which doesn't make this any more interesting. It would be a hell of a lot better, if it moved a bit faster.

[>:O]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music. It was a cool tune, but that is about it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This isn't very entertaining. It's just a single frame with a guy wanking to a flashing background. Really could use some work on the graphics and perhaps some type of storyline to go with it.

[The Chip: Part 1]

(title in work)

Really it's the same old thing. The storyline is completely unoriginal and uninspired, which made it really boring and hard to play the game itself. The graphics didn't help much either. They were very sketchy, especially in the animations. Music and sound effects were really the only redeeming parts about this game.

[Stepfile Tutorial ~Final]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Interesting tutorial to have on here. I've done my hand at making some stepcharts. You seem to have a decent knowledge of what you are talking about. I like how you added courses into this too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really a fan of how you have to zoom in. It's just a bit annoying. Also, it's really annoying how the music restarts when you go back or to another section.

[Strawberry Punch]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics were pretty good. You had good animations and drawings, especially in the punching motion. Looked pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs a little bit more though. Maybe you could add a few more things other than just simply punching the guy. Or maybe some kind of movie added to the beginning instead.