FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hoppity Hop 3]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Decent platform game. It has a good conept and had lots of different obstacles and items and such. Definitely pretty challenging too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really hate how you have to restart the entire game even if you completed a few levels. You should definitely start on the level that you die on.

[flash password]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A pretty useful tutorial here. You go into a lot of detail about the AS and all of the possibilities when making a password. I like how you can download a sample as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you should have used screenshots from the program itself rather than drawing your own. It would be a bit easier to follow.

[Gary Oldman Soundboard]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I thought it was a cool idea how you drew arrows connecting different buttons, for conversations in a prank call, that is unique. Most of these were pretty funny quotes...makes me want to see the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not very impressive graphically. You should have done something besides just a plain black background. And maybe some nicer buttons.

[ASK VEGETA]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I liked the mini game in the preloader, that was pretty entertaining. The art in the game wasn't too bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
Doesn't really work all that well. You should have to ask him a yes or no question or something. A lot of the things he says don't even remotely make an answer to your question.

[Orc Whacker]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I thought the graphics in this game were pretty impressive. Very nice drawings and coloring. Game play was pretty smooth as well, and I liked the knights added, which makes this more challenging.

^^Needs Improving^^
Doesn't really offer much new or interesting to the genre. Very basic and kind of boring.

[Newcomer Tutorial]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, not too bad of a tutorial. You had lots of screenshots to make things a little clearer and I like how you preview the lesson on the menu. Cool idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
There is a whole lot of text in this one. You could size it down a bit.

[Gunther Soundboard]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I actually had fun listening to this. I clicked on just about every button to listen to them. Some funny stuff in here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really practical at all for a prank call. There aren't very many regular conversation clips.

[SC Flash Tutorial]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It's got a lot of information in it. What I looked at seemed to be pretty accurate and helpful for the most part.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's not really that unique. It's got pretty much the same information that most big tutorials have, with not much of your own personal tips and such. Not too impressive graphics either, which makes this less appealing against the big name tuts.

[Blender Babies]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Heh, I thought this is what it would be. Interesting concept. Surprised it didn't get more negative attention. Fun game though.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit repetitive. Doesn't really get any harder or have any real way to win.