FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[GradiumV2:Enemies Inbound]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A very solid shooter game. Lots of neat ships...I like the menu to choose them, and they were all pretty unique in their firepower and design. Smooth game play, easy to get addicted to.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't that great. Could have improved that a bit to make it more interesting.

[_Prisa_]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Seems like the Four Second series, which was a very neat and innovative thing, so trying to recreate it isn't a bad idea. It was pretty challenging to play this as you went on, as time was lower and everything was harder.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really don't like how you have to use the D-keys. It's a lot easier to use WASD when having to use the mouse as well.

Skeik responds:

When I came up with this concept I hadn't even heard of Four Seconds, I just played Wario Ware and I thought it would be a cool concept in flash, just as Four Seconds thought it would be.

If I had made this game later I would've thought about using WASD, thanks for the review.

[Clockday '07 Soundboard]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This was a lot better than I expected it would be. For one, you had a lot of funny and interesting quotes, rather than just a bunch of shit typed into speakonia that made no sense. It's not really good for a prank call, but still some funny quotes in here.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you should have seperated this by who said each quote. I would have liked to know who said what.

[Super Duper Dock Dressup]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The art wasn't too bad at all. Decent drawings with some shading and nice coloring. Also, cool how some parts were animated.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's very limited in number of pieces. Hardly any items besides the faces. Also, this was just one frame, no way it should be three megabytes. Try to compress your music next time.

Imacow responds:

Thanks for the review.

Yur right I never noticed how large it was.

[Cells II]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty interesting game, that was pretty fun to play and also added a little bit of knowledge to it as well. Game play types were cool, and the powerups were a neat addition.

^^Needs Improving^^
It was really laggy. Stuff was jumping around like crazy throughout the game and it was quite annoying. Besides that, I just didn't really like the controls a whole lot. Seemed pretty awkwards to me.

[Cheeb's Halo 2 Adventure]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Not too shabby. The game play was better than I expected it to be. The detection was pretty well done, and there was a certain amount of challenge to playing the game. Didn't find any bugs either.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics could use the most improving. The enemies all looked pretty much exactly the same, which was boring. Backgrounds weren't too impressive either.

[Obstacle Course Game]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it wasn't too bad. It's a neat test of your reaction to time and commands, and it's really quite challenging. Animations were decent, and you switched things up every once in a while to make the game more interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could make things a little easier to click on. There should be a larger area, particularly with the leather. Drawings could use some improving and also, some music or sound effects would be nice.

[Custom Cursor tutorial]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Looks like it has decent information throughout the whole thing. It's a nice feature that you can highlight and copy the script instead of typing it all out.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing really unique or special about this. Pretty much looks like you just found a tutorial and just put it into a Flash. Nothing great in the graphics, and no music, this is really just bland.

[Simple Recipes Ep. 1]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This has to be one of the strangest pieces of food I've ever imagined. It's got some weird ingredients that probably aren't too convenient, but if I had them I would give it a try.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not that it's a bit deal, but you say you need a cheeseburger...which doesn't make sense, as I would just eat that instead. But anyway, compress your music a bit and maybe add something more graphically interesting.

SpeedMetalSandwich responds:

The cheeseburger is so you can prepare it really quickly, rather then cook your meat taking time...

Thanks for the helpful review though!

[Heroes: AotA Demo]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Looks like a very solid demo here, and I think it'd be a great full game when it is done. It's really got a D&D feel to it, which I like, with lots of those same elements in a graphical game. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's hard to say. Not sure what would be in a full version. Definitely needs some working magic and skills though.