FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rel-A-Sketch V2.0]

(title in work)

Ok, this is a very complicated game. I can see it being complicated, as you wanted it to be different from Paint. However, it has even fewer capabilities than a program even as simple as Paint. So here you have a very complicated version of Paint with just the pencil tool and one color. Honestly, I don't see much point. Even with the instructions, it's really hard to get this to do exactly what you want.

[Mega the Alien]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Looks like it could have been a very successful game if you had actually finished it and gotten rid of most of the bugs.

^^Needs Improving^^
Tons of bugs. First, that stupid mole kept throwing shit at me and I couldn't move. Then I couldn't take off whatever the V button enabled no matter what I did. Jumping and platforms was a bit buggy, and at this stage it's just annoying to play this. Also, add some sound effects at least.

[Komodo Kross]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in the game were pretty good. Nice and colorful and a lot of small details were included in this. I think that you've got some skill in that department. The premise of the game isn't bad, just needs some improving.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, it's ridiculous that you can't touch anything. I can see dodging moving people and stuff, but why can I not hit the side of a barn? Doesn't make much sense and was really annoying. Also, after you lose, you get a screen that says "You Win!".

[Gondor Gaming Challenge 2]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Pretty good graphics in this game. Once I figured it out it seemed to be a decent game.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, navigating is terrible. You should have used clicking, which is much easier than using the enter and space keys. At first, I had no idea what the hell was going on because of this, and it's just overall more confusing than anything else. Really turned me off.

[Breakout --y2k5--]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Very impressive graphics. You had a lot of cool effects with the ball and its interaction with hitting things. Nice sound effects and solid game play.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, only one level, and not challenging at all. No speed changes or powerups/powerdowns that are common in all good breakout games. This was basically just a show of graphics, which was a bit much for such a simplistic game.

[basic movement *new*]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This tutorial had a few decent points in it that are probably useful to people who are animating.

^^Needs Improving^^
Parts of this, however, don't make you sound like and expert in this field. Movement 1 is completely devoid of details and such. This is riddled with bad grammar and parts hard to understand.

[redsplash drum set]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A pretty versatile piece you have here. I know nothing of drums, but you seemed to have quite a few pieces here, all working, and all having pretty cool art and animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would say that they key configuration is a bit weird, but then again, you could customize the keys. Other than that, maybe be able to get continuous hits to follow a beat you set.

[Celebrity Lovechild Quiz]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A pretty funny little game you've got here. There was a lot of combinations here, each of which were pretty challenging to figure out...though mainly because I don't know many celebrities. Still funny to see this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Would have been cool if you could get a score or something to give you a rank or something.

[Bubble-Pop]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I liked the graphics in the game play. You animated the bubbles pretty coolly, and had some decent sound effects and music to go along with it. Also, no cheating with the tab button.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's really lacking though. It's not very interesting, as the game play doesn't change at all throughout, and didn't seem to get harder either.

[Acorn Toss]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A decent idea for a game, works fairly well too. With some refining it could really be a better game.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really is not difficult at all. The game doesn't increase in difficulty at as you go on, and at no point is it really difficult. I think I could pretty easily go on forever playing this game. Needs more challenge.