FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Orb Catcher]

K

^^Good Points^^
One thing I liked was the background picture you used. It fits the foreign and spacy mood that the circle thing you control makes. Game works well too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is just missing some stuff. First off, no music or sound effects means bad things for any game. This game is also pretty boring. You just play until time runs out. Add levels with certain requirements, maybe obstacles or enemies would be a nice touch as well.

[shoot pokemons!!!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I'll admit that the blood/exploding animations weren't half bad, better than most games in this genre.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, there are no buttons in this. The preloader doesn't work, nor is there a play button. Once the game is over, you have to right click and hit play to proceed and play the game again. The game isn't particularly funny because it isn't hard at all. It's repetitive, and there are no sound effects.

[Worms Dress-Up]

K

^^Good Points^^
Let's see, I like how you drew everything yourself, that is always a good thing. There were quite a few items. The music is also good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main game needs a music off button. Other than that, there isn't much room to dress up your worm, I would make this bigger to give some more room, and perhaps some extra backgrounds would make this a little better.

[Creature Garden]

K

^^Good Points^^
This could definitely be a good game if you continued it a little bit and made it longer. The game works well, and the many different bars and meters are intruiging to me.

^^Needs Improving^^
Right now the game is too short. Once you get the trampoline, which takes no more than a few minutes, you win the game, which isn't very fun. There aren't any sound effects, which I also don't like.

[VegMan]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how one could switch between vegman and vegwoman, this is a cool feature. The game seems to work fine, and there are many different words to play with.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, the game isn't really a good game to put into flash. It's a word game, which isn't what the people of NG generally like, and there wasn't anything much in it to make it very interesting. There is also no music/sound effects.

[Crono-walking-testing]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this is the music, which I assume is from the game. It is also cool how you have the compus that works when you move in different directions.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, all you can do is move this guy around. I guess the test worked, but the game isn't completed, so what was the point in this. You can't enter any of the buildings, or really anyting of interest in this game.

[Spiffy Spaceguy III (a)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, the game doesn't seem to be very buggy, it has a good score system and decent game play and responsiveness. I liked the sound effects you added as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, you need to give people the instructions to your game, I had no idea how to play at first. This game is also incredibly easy, and it doesn't seem to get any harder as it goes on, so I found this game pretty boring.

[Throw Balls at FAT GOKU]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music best in this. Rob Zombie makes some awesome music, and you just can't go wrong with it. Some fo the graphics, like Homer Simpson were funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is not fun to play at all. For one thing, I thought that shooting Fat Goku would mean shooting the fat guy who happens to look like goku hiding behind Homer, but aparently, Fat Goku refers to all of the weird guys running around in the background, who turn to a red circle when you shoot them. The game is really bugged too, a lot of times when I click I don't shoot at all.

[Butt Statue]

K

^^Good Points^^
I really like the animations and drawings in this, they show that you have some talent in Flash. Your animations are very fluid and detailed, like all the MC's in the butt and toilets. The game itself is a good, humorous concept that I could see becoming a good game.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, there is no sound, and with a game like this, sound effects would just be hilarious, and a good song could be found as well. I find that some enemies are just plain out of your range by being too far down on the bottom. The game also isn't very fun since it moves incredibly slow and really isn't challenging at all.

[Create A City!]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music you put in this game. It really reminds me of a Sim city type game. Having different backgrounds is a good idea as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
About the music, once I turned it off, I found that I couldn't really turn it back on, which was disappointing. With the backgrounds, you should try to have them the same perspective as the pieces used to build the city just so that they make sense when you use them. You should also have a reset button, and to be completely hones, there aren't many items in here, especially not varying items like trees, benches, things put into every city.