FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MK scorpion vs. Noob]

MY EARS!

^^Good Points^^
This movie is very well done for the most part. I really liked how well you animated the fight scene in this movie. It was really quite exciting, and much better than most of the sprite fight scenes on NG. Very well done. I also liked the sound effects, they were pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
As the title suggests, something in the sound department I didn't like. That was the music. What kind of vocals were they?? Seriously, pick something more techno or something. I think it would go a lot better.

filipinoy69 responds:

hahaha...thats hard core...its not finish yet...yeah ill try to think of techno stuff

[Bbq walking down the park]

Heh

^^Good Points^^
My favorite part during this movie was when you shot the scared little boy. I found it funny when you said "Attacker!" and then shot him. Priceless stuff. The music was good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I have no idea why it is becoming your thing to do your drawings in Paint, it just looks really crappy, and animating must be hard, since you didn't really put any in, just freeze frames of different actions.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Paint is for tru pro's

[#RELAX#]

This is kind of funny.

^^Good Points^^
I think this submission was actually pretty good, though I am usually not a big fan of your work. I thought some of the photoshopping you did towards the end were done well, mainly the Hitler one. I also like the "Newgrounds causes cancer" line, that made me lol. The music was pretty relaxing too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't show a lot of actual animating other than the slow zooming of a few items. Most of the pictures you used in this weren't that entertaining either.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Thank you for review

["24 Seconds" episode 3]

Another bad episode

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music. Like the other episodes in this series, I liked how you made the music subtle during the actual movie part of this, and made it more relevant at the end during the credits. The voice overs were clear, which is nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I realize that you are not aiming for a storyline, which really hurts you, but anyway, what was here, I didn't find very funny at all. The guy wakes up and is angry, that's all that happens. You shouldn't expect anyone to like a movie if it relies on one joke, that really isn't funny at all.

[omerta]

Pretty cool

^^Good Points^^
For a first movie, this was excellent. The graphics were pretty impressive. I liked the scene looking down on the car's hood, and the slow motion right before that. The sound effects and music were also pretty cool. I thought this was pretty cool, but it had a few problems.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline doesn't really tell us a lot. This guy shoots someone and then drives off of the building. Nothing else really happens. The voice overs were a little hard to hear in the beginning.

[Animator vs. Animation]

Nice idea!

^^Good Points^^
I've seen people attempt to do stuff like this before, but I've never seen one done quite this well. The most impressive part about this was that it kept me occupied for the full time that I was watching it and I did not get bored at all. You got very creative with all the different animations you used and all the components of flash that were used to simulate weapons and other movements. I liked the ending and was thoroughly impressed with this. I liked how you had the scene select after the end too.

^^Needs Improving^^
It becomes a little hard to follow towards the end because of all the guys and the mouse becomes a little hard to see, but I don't really know a good way to fix that problem.

[HOT NUDE ASIAN WOMEN!]

Err?

^^Good Points^^
This didn't have bad graphics. The shading you used and the drawings were pretty good, though you've used them in multiple submissions of yours before. I also liked the fade in of Speakonia, that makes me laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
Kind of nasty to see Fat Badger's weiner. This is really short and just a loop, like something you'd see in a GG collab! (zing!) You've also submitted things very similar to this before.

[Muffin of Doom]

Interesting...

^^Good Points^^
This is an interesting movie. The main character is an evil muffin, which is unique. I liked the music, it flowed with the animations very well. I liked your drawing style and the constant camera angle changes you made. The end was kind of cute too.

^^Needs Improving^^
It seemed like you tried to make this too much of a FBF movie with just random stuff. A lot of the time you were just making shapes and moving them around, which really had nothing to do with the storyline.

Khold responds:

Thank you :)
The thing is though... random shapes are what i like about FBFs :P
If you've seen even my Paper and Pencil drawings, a lot of them are just random shapes that look really cool... originally i wanted to make a random-shape FBF with a muffin cameo, but then i thought "why not just tell the story of 'Muffin of Doom?'" so i tried to make it half-and-half, but i see what you mean, though.

the random FBF parts are dividers between the scenes of the story.