FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[RoboClock: The Movie]

K

^^Good Points^^
Sadly, the art was the best part about this movie, and even that was pretty shoddy.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really a lack of effort. This movie is extremely short and just loops with an annoying sound effect played in the background. Not very interesting or fun to look at.

[Lab 2 - The Time Ray]

K

^^Good Points^^
The second episode, and another great one. So far this series is looking like a great one. It was funny how intricate this episode was, and how you actually wrapped everything up eventually that didn't make much sense in the beginning. Very creative.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing specific I can think of at this point. Great job.

[Lab 1 - Killer Hair Gel]

K

^^Good Points^^
Awesome movie you have here. I hope it wins the contest that it has recently been entered in. Definitely deserves to win. The jokes were very funny, especially the ones in the beginning. Shortest graduation ceremony ever...heh. Great drawings and cool animations. Will definitely look for the next episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voice overs were a little low, I had to turn up my volume. Other than that, no problems.

[Super Duper FBF]

K

^^Good Points^^
Smooth animation. With some improvements you could probably make some good movies in the future.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall, a pretty boring FBF movie. You had the whole screen to work with, yet only used a small portion of it at a time. Also, you only used red, which didn't help. Could have used some more color to make it more interesting.

Cales-Kales responds:

Watch my other movies. I agree with your reveiw but line FBF takes no talent. This was my first movie so it sucked and I am not making another line fbf again. Thanks for the reveiw.

[Paz Bot Angry Robot King]

K

^^Good Points^^
A neat little short. The music was cool, and I thought the animations weren't bad either. Cool for a short, random violence movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could definitely use some sound effects. There was a ton of destruction going on that really needs to be amplified by some loud noises.

[OMG Cliff Hanger]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were very good. Very detailed drawings of the ships, and the animations were smooth and realistic as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hope you will continue this. Making this just for the sake of having a cliff hanger is kind of sill. Seems like it could be good if you continue.

[duck300.fla]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't that bad. It was an interesting combination of duck and 300. I really liked the twist at the end with the fancy epilepsy scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animation in the beginning was pretty lame. Should have drawn some backgrounds or something for this.

[udder and a Piglet]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was random, but I still found it pretty neat and interesting. The graphics were clean, and I thought you had some good ideas. It was kind of cute I guess. Sound effects made it a lot more interesting as well. Looking forward to more work from you.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just make a movie making some more sense, or better yet, just something longer.