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[duck300.fla]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't that bad. It was an interesting combination of duck and 300. I really liked the twist at the end with the fancy epilepsy scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animation in the beginning was pretty lame. Should have drawn some backgrounds or something for this.

[udder and a Piglet]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was random, but I still found it pretty neat and interesting. The graphics were clean, and I thought you had some good ideas. It was kind of cute I guess. Sound effects made it a lot more interesting as well. Looking forward to more work from you.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just make a movie making some more sense, or better yet, just something longer.

[Link come to town]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good flash for a good song. I've seen better, but this still had its own unique points that made it entertaining. Great drawing, with very symbolic drawings. Looked like a real casual movie. Fun to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Looks like it was a pretty quick job. The animations were simple, and there were no background drawings either.

[Bobbles]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely an unexpected ending to this short. The animation was pretty well done, and overall the graphics were very clear cut and defined. Liked the sound effects and music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The ending was interesting, but it was still disappointing. I thought that you would have done a whole song and kept adding more bobbles to the scene.

sysrq868 responds:

I was originally going to add more bobbles, but firstly, the song did more of that same synth line that the bobbles were dancing to before they died now a couple of more times. I didn't see why they should've stopped dancing like that all of a sudden, but then again, to repeat that same dance move would've been just boring.

People do seem to like this short though, so maybe you'll see longer submissions with bobbles in the future, who knows!

Thanks for the review!
-- sysrq868

[Python's Hand Grenade!]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the sound clip was pretty funny. It was funny how it dragged on with the counting to three.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics and animation in this wasn't that good. You pretty much just drew whatever the word being said was. It would have been better with some characters, maybe including the guy making the speech.

unholymoose responds:

Yeah iam pritty new at flash and ill take you idea in to fluition!

[synjclock]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie featured a very cool, trippy dance scene. The music was great for the scene, which had very cool graphics. The animations were very detailed and almost realistic if that makes sense. Great music for a dance as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit short. Could have used some more crazy epilepsy stuff.

[Strawberry Jam]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were really good. I liked the three dimensional environments, they looked very cool. Definitely spiced this up quite a bit.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voicing was not speakonia, which is pretty stupid. Also, your explosion sound effects was really loud and low quality. Silly stuff like this makes a movie a lot worse.

[PONG: The Movie (Trailer)]

K

^^Good Points^^
This looks like the full version will be very good. I was pretty well entertained by just this trailer. I liked the epic music and voicing, which really made this seem serious, and I guess that is what really makes this fun to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you may have given away a bit much in the trailer. Basically all there needs to be added to this is an ending.

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