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[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
The loading screen was pretty cool. Better graphics, with the backgrounds added in this episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not saying short is necessarily bad, and I like movies shorter than longer, but there is a point where it really takes away from the movie. In this I really thought you should have added a few more stunts and made this a little bit longer.

Jimtopia responds:

This cartoon was either really funny, or really dumb. I tried my hardest to make this really funny, but to certain people it may just seem dumb. Glad you liked the pre-loader though. Just remember, this is a short because I don't want it to take away to much time from bigger projects I'm working on.

[Mid-Coast Avengers 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The art was the best part about this. I liked the drawings of your characters. They were very colorful and looked like what they were supposed to be. The voice acting wasn't bad for the most part either. Some humor, though the style is a little dry.

^^Needs Improving^^
It lacked a good amount of jokes or storyline I think. Seemed to move pretty slowly to me.

Review Request Club

[BBQish Ackbar!]

K

^^Good Points^^
I knew these two would meet up at one point. I thought the encounter was pretty humorous. Fart jokes spread at random points throughout, comical graphics, and a neat storyline overall. The ending was pretty funny too. Didn't expect them to get that involved :o

^^Needs Improving^^
Did you use the BBQ and Akbar packs? I can't tell, but they look a little bit odd.

RSQViper responds:

Packs? Heck, no. I made these bad boys from scratch. Ackbar is the same, but bbq is definitely from different pieces and he had no hat.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked the movie and found it funny. It was a quick one I found humerous. =)

Thanks for reviewing!

[Who Wants to Play House?]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty entertaining short. I found the one character who wanted to be a dog really funny to watch. His crazy screaming was hilarious. Good animations and overall a movie to remember.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm a little confused. They all looked like girls to me, and also sounded like girls. I think you need slightly better voice acting.

[Paperboy (NES)]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good parody of Paper Boy. That game was pretty fun to play, especially aggravating the non-subscribers. The ending headline was pretty hilarious, I liked that part of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall, it's easy to tell that this was your first video game parody. The animations were a little odd, and also the sound was a bit off in places.

[>>> Kung Fu <<<]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, the ending was really the best part. I thought it was funny how the knife stuck into the girl's head, that was unexpected. The added sound effects were pretty humorous as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could have used some zooming effects or something just to make the thing overall more humorous. Still cameras are a killer.

[Final Fantasy...Sorta V2]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was a good point in this. Also, I didn't mind the animations too much, they were decent and like the game.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, you display a loading movie screen for a while, long after the movie is completed. Preloader works just fine and doesn't waste time. Also, the storyline was repetitive and really long for what was offered.

[That Halo Thing: ep4]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how the viewer was able to control the flow of the movie, that is always nice. The text was clear and easy to read. For the most part the movie was entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were so-so. Some of the sprites weren't cut very well and had white around the edges, as well as some low quality in the backgrounds. Animations were the same. Didn't look natural and no zooming effects or camera movement to make things more interesting.

[Final Fantasy: Armpits!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, I can't imagine what you would think of the portal today! Anyway, I like how you made a movie to show your views.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty terrible. You used a lot of low quality images from the movie/game you are criticizing and I honestly can't imagine this being a whole lot better quality than said submission. Needs some sound effects/voice overs in it.