FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL - Master's Birthday.]

Pretty good

^^Good Points^^
Birthday flash movies are usually pretty good, and this one is no different. The gift idea is funny, it made me chuckle. I liked the drawings you made and the animations as well. The voice overs mixed with speakonia is nice as well. Good job on this and happy birthday to master lock.

^^Needs Improving^^
This isn't very unique as a birthday flash. It follows the same lines of many other birthday movies that I've seen on here.

Trunks-Lock responds:

Thank you very much, and I know i'm not that unique. But i give it a new twist.

[TheChromePlated Megaphone]

Hmmm....

Let's see here. First off, the title is Epic Collab Six, yet the title in the movie itself is Epic Collab Five, which says to me you just slapped these pieces in and was done with it. It's obvious you didn't spend much time on this. The graphics were pretty poor in each part and there was nothing really funny about this. I did not enjoy watching this at all.

[Redneck 911 Call]

Pretty well done.

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this submission is the graphics. You did your drawings very professionally and very real to life. Both the animations and the drawings were done pretty well. The storyline in this is kind of funny, and the joke is decent as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought that this progressed a little too slowly. For the joke that was included, I thought the length was too much. Also, the voice overs seem to be very soft, since I had to turn up my volume pretty high to hear them.

[Ah, Screw it!]

Pretty good

^^Good Points^^
I like the drawings in this flash. You drew your characters very well and shaded them nicely. The different things that went on were all pretty funny and entertaining to watch. I liked the music as well, it's a unique piece.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should definitely make some more episodes of these if you can, they are quite entertaining, and also make the text a little bigger.

Kuoke responds:

Thankyou, Thankyou, I'm gonna start of a short series, i might get back to parodies after that.

[Emo]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were good in this. Your characters looked pretty well drawn and the like. I liked the message in this, and how it was kind of funny the way you got it across. The musical choices were good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a little too short for my tastes and it just wasn't really all that funny.

[Mr. Toast: Episode 02]

Kind of humorous

^^Good Points^^
I don't think this is quite so bad as I had expected it to be. This was really random, which in most cases I don't like, but for some reason I liked it here. The music was an interesting choice and pretty unique. I liked the script you had and the random ending was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Mr toast could definitely be a better character with adventures filled with storylines and what not. Oh well.

[MK scorpion vs. Noob]

MY EARS!

^^Good Points^^
This movie is very well done for the most part. I really liked how well you animated the fight scene in this movie. It was really quite exciting, and much better than most of the sprite fight scenes on NG. Very well done. I also liked the sound effects, they were pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
As the title suggests, something in the sound department I didn't like. That was the music. What kind of vocals were they?? Seriously, pick something more techno or something. I think it would go a lot better.

filipinoy69 responds:

hahaha...thats hard core...its not finish yet...yeah ill try to think of techno stuff

[Bbq walking down the park]

Heh

^^Good Points^^
My favorite part during this movie was when you shot the scared little boy. I found it funny when you said "Attacker!" and then shot him. Priceless stuff. The music was good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I have no idea why it is becoming your thing to do your drawings in Paint, it just looks really crappy, and animating must be hard, since you didn't really put any in, just freeze frames of different actions.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Paint is for tru pro's

[#RELAX#]

This is kind of funny.

^^Good Points^^
I think this submission was actually pretty good, though I am usually not a big fan of your work. I thought some of the photoshopping you did towards the end were done well, mainly the Hitler one. I also like the "Newgrounds causes cancer" line, that made me lol. The music was pretty relaxing too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't show a lot of actual animating other than the slow zooming of a few items. Most of the pictures you used in this weren't that entertaining either.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Thank you for review