FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[RSFuture 4]

What? That's it?

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this was the close up drawing. I thought it was cool how you showed many different angles of the same guy at the same time.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, this movie doesn't have a very good storyline at all. There is some guy with a guitar that plays, and then one character is in a store and asks what an NPC is. That's not a very good storyline at all. I thought perhaps this would have something more to do with the guy with the guitar. Another thing, less important, is that the music WAS a little annoying as the last reviewer said.

Syrsly responds:

Agreed.

[RSF: Quest for Perfection]

All over the place

^^Good Points^^
I love Runescape, started playing back during the RSC days, so I already like the fact that it's about RS. The up close drawings of your characters were done very well and look very cool. Perhaps you should try a whole movie done like that. I also liked the music choices. The music was always changing and always fit the mood.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline in this was kind of all over the place. Nothing really seemed to be related to anything else and every twenty seconds the storyline would change completely and then change again.

Syrsly responds:

Yeah, old movie... Watch RSDragoons.

[How To Raid A Bank]

Neat

^^Good Points^^
I guess if anyone wanted to know how to raid a bank, this would be the place to turn. I liked the many different scenes in this and the way you made this into a guide instead of a regular movie made it much better. I liked the interactivity in the first two scenes and liked how if you picked the wrong one, there was a quick little movie and then you picked again.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing is that I would have liked to have seen the entire movie interactive. Just having the first two scenes interactive doesn't make much sense. Also, you could have put some more detail and shading into your scenes.

[Popups Suck!]

This is alright.

^^Good Points^^
Well, everyone hates popup adds, so you picked a good thing to put in front of suck in the title to your movie. The animations were smooth and the drawings were pretty good as well. I liked the "A.S.S." error on the computer, especially the paragraph about Microsoft. The end was kind of funny as well. Short, sweet, and to the point.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought you could have been a little more creative with your pop-up adds and made them more NG oriented or something.

[Mantis (Trailer)]

Good.

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty powerful trailer! The voice over was done with effort and lots of emphasis. The voice over was done very well, and the music you used also set the mood, especially the music at the end. The backgrounds were drawn very well and animations were good too. The trailer gave a good amount of information about the movie yet doesn't give the storyline to the series away. It's a shame that you didn't make any episodes to this series, because it seemed like it would be a good series.

^^Needs Improving^^
You used stick figures...not a good thing. I felt that you could have used real people with the graphical skill you showed in the background.

[Chasing Amy]

Pretty interesting.

^^Good Points^^
My favorite part of this was the introduction you wrote. I found it quite funny when you said "This might offend a gay person" for some reason. Anyway, this was a good clip to make a movie about. I've never seen the movie, but it sounds pretty funny from this line.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't do a whole lot for this. Your images didn't look like you drew them and there wasn't much animation at all. Your animations and subtitles didn't match up to the text either.

[8]

Funny but short.

^^Good Points^^
This definitely is not a bad movie by a long shot. I'm not sure exactly what motivated the storyline, but hell I liked it. The sound effects were laughable at how horrid they sounded and the ending was just too funny not to smile at.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is just a bit too short for me. If this had been longer I would have given it a much higher score.

BruceCampbellClock responds:

ill repost this answer:

yes, this is actually just a work in progress version of this.

http://newgrounds.com/portal/view/287887

the full one is alittle bit longer with full color and some better animations.

[Bof: Armageddon Part 2]

Better

^^Good Points^^
This episode is definitely better than the first episode. You added a lot more humor to this and I actually got a laugh out of this movie. You managed to keep the storyline still pretty fresh and developed it even more. The fight scene was much better as well. You added some cool attacks and it was much better than the first.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should add more sound effects or something. The music is really too dominant in the sound department.

[BOF: Armageddon Pt. 1]

This is pretty good.

^^Good Points^^
I'm a big fan of the BoF series of games, so finding a BoF movie series on NG is great, especially since it seems to be a good series! There was quite a bit of action in this and the storyline was pretty nice. You ended this episode in a good place, right where I expected it to end. For the sprites that are available for BoF, you did a pretty good job of animating as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music kind of got repetive after a while, and the fight scene seemed to be very drawn out and there isn't a lot of humor in this.