FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Planet of Robots]

K

^^Good Points^^
The art in this movie was well made. I liked the very dark tones in the color, and the drawings were above average as well. The music was also cool. Set a neat mood for the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not sure I really like the storyline in this movie. It was a short movie, which isn't necessarily bad, but you developed no storyline at all really. I don't really see what you are trying to accomplish with the storyline. Robots are unable to make their own societies? Not very interesting.

[why newgrounds?.]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty well made. I've never seen one quite like it, that is actually a tribute to the strange things on NG. The movie was actually kind of funny, how you showcased the things on NG that you like, for example the "weird porn". I liked the music, and the screenshots and animations were high quality.

^^Needs Improving^^
You basically took 3/4 of the time talking about the question at hand--why you are on NG--yet didn't take nearly enough time in comparison to answer the question.

[Srawberry Clock's RUN!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Interesting to see a three dimensional movie like this, I've seen very few. I am glad you made the filesize a little bit higher instead of sacrificing quality, good move there. The quality was in fact quite high. I liked the speakonia, and the ending was pretty funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly, I wouldn't mind waiting much longer for this to load and have a longer storyline to watch. You should really try this style with a better storyline with more going on. This seems like more of a test.

[Blot and the lost pyramid]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is the first episode of the series that I've watched, but not sure if it was the first made. Anyway, I like what I see as a first impression on the series. Most people don't do graphics three dimensional as you did in this, and you did a good job if I may say. The 3D was very realistic. Even your animations were very good, especially the walking. Also, I liked the humor in this. There wasn't much until the dragon scene, but that made up for no humor in the beginning, great scene that was.

^^Needs Improving^^
3D graphics are amazing, but still you could have put some more detail into your drawings. The walls were just plain fill, which doesn't look that great.

[tbon #1: Clocks vs Sticks]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very interesting movie that seems like it would have made a good series. I was most surprised by the fact that this was only one short part of the series. I really like the bracket system you set up, and as I said, would have been interesting to see who exactly won the entire series. The graphics were well made, some good animations in this, especially when you did some stuff in slow motion. Also, good music and sound effects. Overall a well-rounded movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
You did some of the graphics in photoshop, which wasn't too bad, but I can tell this because some things look a bit pixilated. I could understand not wanting to use flash for all of your drawings.

[Christmas Sasquatch]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie at all. The storyline was kind of cute. I wasn't expecting that ending to come about. I like how you did the sound effects too, they were unique and funny. The graphics were good as well. You had good use of gradients, and your animation was above average as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm pretty sure you submitted this once before, well actually I'm pretty positive, since I remember reviewing it and seeing the characters. You changed it around a lot, I'm not sure if it was for better or worse.

Review Request Club

Bretherin responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah I began animating this last christmas but like many other projects, I lost interest. Then this xmas my bro and I both made our own endings for it.

[Jeez's Birthday]

K

^^Good Points^^
For a movie of such length, about ten seconds, this was pretty good. Better than most movies of this length. You did a good drawing of Jesus, seems to be a very radical dude, and you lip synced well. Also, I liked the voice over you did for him.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, I've never seen a ten second movie that really was entertaining and funny, and this is no different. There's nothing wrong with this movie in particular, but a ten second movie just doesn't cut it, no matter how well it is made.

[Kirby Kombat]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a decent fight scene with Kirby. The animations weren't too bad, and you had some good effects, like when Kirby split the guy right in half. I also like the menu, it had some cool stuff to look at, and the songs were great.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is just too generic for me. There is no storyline other than Kirby fighting these guys, which isn't much of a storyline. You also need to add some sound effects to this movie. Fight scenes are much to boring without hearing some swords clash together and body parts being dismantled!