FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[after lockday 2006]

Ok.

^^Good Points^^
I think it is a good idea for a "Day After" type movie. This turned out to be a funny movie. I liked jellyfish lock and her rape-ness. The storyline was pretty funny and I liked the flashback scenes. The music during that was top knotch.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't too great. I didn't like the drawing of the porn parlor. You should have added some shading and more detail because it looks very noobish as it is. Also, the sound effects are just so overused. Get your effects from somewhere other than flash kit. I would recommend, since your characters talk in speakonia, to do the screams in Speakonia.

[BreadFruitClock 2]

Again, not too shabby.

^^Good Points^^
I liked how this one picked up right after where the first episode ended. The script was pretty funny as well. My favorite part was the graphics though. Some parts, like the tree in the computer scene were drawn with a hell of a lot of detail and look almost life-like.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was disappointed when you switched the voices over to Speakonia. this would have been a unique series had you used your own voice overs like in the first episode. The joke isn't quite as funny as it is the first time. I hope that the whole series isn't like this. :s

[BreadFruitClock]

Heh, a good start

^^Good Points^^
This was a good start to a series. I liked how you used your own voice overs instead of Speakonia, it is a pleasant change from the normal. The punchline came in at a great time and the Benny Hill music went perfectly with the randomness of the ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was kind of looking forward to a history lesson, unfortunately. :( Also, your shading is really weird looking and not accurate at all. But then again this is a Clock movie, so nothing has to be accurate ;)

[BreadfruitClock 5 (2)]

Hmmm...

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this version were improved a lot. The shading is much improved, as is the small amount of animations. Overall, the only thing that really improved in this from the last version is the graphics.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this joke isn't quite as funny the second time one watches it. This would have been better had it had a different storyline/events from the first episode.

BreadFruitLock responds:

:o

[BreadFruitClock 5]

Not bad.

^^Good Points^^
Well, I'm always biased towards liking Lock/Clock movies for some reason, so of course I thought this was good. The storyline was kind of funny, and I liked the ending...getting exploded by a piclownjew, what a terrible way to die. I liked the different tones you used in Speakonia and the preloader is nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought this was pretty good.

[LL - Cut!]

Not half bad.

^^Good Points^^
For this being your first Lock movie and second movie ever, I think this is pretty good. The graphics were good. The perspective was good, as well as the shading and drawings. The storyline had some humor as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I hate that british accent on Speakonia, and you should take it off just because it sucks.

FlashShark responds:

Thanks, a very honest review for once.

[LL - A Lockday Short]

Yeah...

^^Good Points^^
I thought the graphics were pretty unique. I liked how you kind of FBF'd it and moved from frame to frame, that was pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
It doesn't appear as if you put a whole lot of time into making this. There isn't really a clear storyline or events. The graphics weren't very detailed and this was short.

[Lockday 06: TruffleLock]

No.

^^Good Points^^
Graphically this flash was well done. The shading was excellent, and the drawings were well done as well. Very nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I read your edit to the description, and I don't care. I still watched it and will still review it. This was bad. It had absolutely no point whatsoever. There was not storyline that went anywhere, though breadfruit went many places. A storyline would supplement this quite well!

TruffleClock responds:

i am completely ignoring your suggestions becuase they are shitty and storylines are gay