FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-=-Mayo Song-=-]

Nice song

^^Good Points^^
I liked the song. It has a great beat and has some funny lyrics. I would say that this is a good song to base a flash film on.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are really terrible. They are 95% real life pictures that are really crappy looking. You did very little editing of the picture, which makes them look pretty bad (like the white around the mayo jar). This really doesn't show a whole lot of talent.

[I don't even]

yeah

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't bad at all. I liked your shading and the animations weren't bad either. I thought the ending was kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
As you probably have already found out, this is a bit short. You could have added some scenes from before where the movie started to make it a whole bunch better.

BloodyFuel responds:

Yeah well as I said I was busy...

[LL- Bustafruit]

Eh?

^^Good Points^^
By reading the Author's Comments, this movie becomes slightly clearer and a tad bit funnier. I guess Bustafruit's friend keeps him down by exploding him? That's kind of a funny idea, but just not a good movie. The drawings aren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was way too short. From what I deduced about this movie and said above, this could have been a much better movie had it been longer with some more plot details.

Stressball responds:

what's a plot?

[Leet Majora's Mask]

Swell.

^^Good Points^^
Another nice leet zelda movie. I liked how all the character's voice overs seem so non-chalant and layed back, nicely done. The satire in this was excellent. I liked how you poked fun at the game and the storyline. Another good episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could use some definition, mainly the backgrounds etc. As it is right now, the backgrounds look very bland.

[after lockday 2006]

Ok.

^^Good Points^^
I think it is a good idea for a "Day After" type movie. This turned out to be a funny movie. I liked jellyfish lock and her rape-ness. The storyline was pretty funny and I liked the flashback scenes. The music during that was top knotch.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't too great. I didn't like the drawing of the porn parlor. You should have added some shading and more detail because it looks very noobish as it is. Also, the sound effects are just so overused. Get your effects from somewhere other than flash kit. I would recommend, since your characters talk in speakonia, to do the screams in Speakonia.

[BreadFruitClock 2]

Again, not too shabby.

^^Good Points^^
I liked how this one picked up right after where the first episode ended. The script was pretty funny as well. My favorite part was the graphics though. Some parts, like the tree in the computer scene were drawn with a hell of a lot of detail and look almost life-like.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was disappointed when you switched the voices over to Speakonia. this would have been a unique series had you used your own voice overs like in the first episode. The joke isn't quite as funny as it is the first time. I hope that the whole series isn't like this. :s

[BreadFruitClock]

Heh, a good start

^^Good Points^^
This was a good start to a series. I liked how you used your own voice overs instead of Speakonia, it is a pleasant change from the normal. The punchline came in at a great time and the Benny Hill music went perfectly with the randomness of the ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was kind of looking forward to a history lesson, unfortunately. :( Also, your shading is really weird looking and not accurate at all. But then again this is a Clock movie, so nothing has to be accurate ;)

[BreadfruitClock 5 (2)]

Hmmm...

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this version were improved a lot. The shading is much improved, as is the small amount of animations. Overall, the only thing that really improved in this from the last version is the graphics.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this joke isn't quite as funny the second time one watches it. This would have been better had it had a different storyline/events from the first episode.

BreadFruitLock responds:

:o

[BreadFruitClock 5]

Not bad.

^^Good Points^^
Well, I'm always biased towards liking Lock/Clock movies for some reason, so of course I thought this was good. The storyline was kind of funny, and I liked the ending...getting exploded by a piclownjew, what a terrible way to die. I liked the different tones you used in Speakonia and the preloader is nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought this was pretty good.