FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL - Cut!]

Not half bad.

^^Good Points^^
For this being your first Lock movie and second movie ever, I think this is pretty good. The graphics were good. The perspective was good, as well as the shading and drawings. The storyline had some humor as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I hate that british accent on Speakonia, and you should take it off just because it sucks.

FlashShark responds:

Thanks, a very honest review for once.

[LL - A Lockday Short]

Yeah...

^^Good Points^^
I thought the graphics were pretty unique. I liked how you kind of FBF'd it and moved from frame to frame, that was pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
It doesn't appear as if you put a whole lot of time into making this. There isn't really a clear storyline or events. The graphics weren't very detailed and this was short.

[Lockday 06: TruffleLock]

No.

^^Good Points^^
Graphically this flash was well done. The shading was excellent, and the drawings were well done as well. Very nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I read your edit to the description, and I don't care. I still watched it and will still review it. This was bad. It had absolutely no point whatsoever. There was not storyline that went anywhere, though breadfruit went many places. A storyline would supplement this quite well!

TruffleClock responds:

i am completely ignoring your suggestions becuase they are shitty and storylines are gay

[LL-SAW part 2]

Not the best sequel

^^Good Points^^
This got good at the end when Peanutbutter stabbed the other guy (not sure his name). I liked the speakonia, and the storyline was pretty good. I liked the ending as well. It made me roffle.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like how the triangle dealies above the locks kept moving long after the character was done speaking.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

yes the speaking was messed up I had to cut it into 2 parts the movie was originally 24 fps but when I put it into the new document i forgot to change it back to 24 so its at 12 fps the second movie.

[LL-SAW part 1]

Quite entertaining.

^^Good Points^^
Another good Lock Day submission, I can't wait to watch the second part. This had a good storyline that was adapted to a LL way to make it more funny and more enjoyable. The humor was great. I liked Mobile Phone's death scene, that was quite funny, and Fire Hydrant was funny as well, there are many parts in this that are funny. Great job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Most of the time there wasn't a whole lot of animating going on, and there was just still frames with sparse animations.

[Anti-American!! Chomsky]

Pretty good for a political movie

^^Good Points^^
I usually don't enjoy movies that have anything to do with political things, however, I somewhat enjoyed watching this. It's the first time I've seen someone make a movie based on a speech. The subtle background music was a nice touch and the pictures and graphics were well done. This had a good message too and had a strong meaning.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was kind of a snoozer for me though. Got a little boring after a while since it is based on a speech.

[LL lockday 2006]

Ha, this was awesome!

^^Good Points^^
I just cannot wait for Lock Day. It will be a great day of celebration and protecting movies. Back to the review on this movie...this was a pretty darn good movie. I loved the music, SOAD pwns. The graphics were pretty good, especially the animations. I liked the speakonia usage also. The pitch was pretty sweet. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Uhh...This was good. yay.

[Im no superman]

A good start.

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't half bad for your first submission to NG, it's much better than a lot of stuff that gets through the portal. I liked the song and how you made the animations go along with what was happening in the song.

^^Needs Improving^^
Try using some shading in your graphics. It really helps to make a movie look more professional. This could also stand some more definition and detail in it.

[Romeo & Juliet (anim)]

A good summary

^^Good Points^^
I think that for two days of work, you did a pretty darn good job on this movie. It stuck to the storyline of R&J and had some humor in it as well. The animations were pretty good and I also thought the voice overs were very well done. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Of course there are things that could be improved since this was only done in two days, but I'm not going to waste my time. Hell it was done in two days, you couldn't have done much better.