FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lockday 06: TruffleLock]

No.

^^Good Points^^
Graphically this flash was well done. The shading was excellent, and the drawings were well done as well. Very nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I read your edit to the description, and I don't care. I still watched it and will still review it. This was bad. It had absolutely no point whatsoever. There was not storyline that went anywhere, though breadfruit went many places. A storyline would supplement this quite well!

TruffleClock responds:

i am completely ignoring your suggestions becuase they are shitty and storylines are gay

[LL-SAW part 2]

Not the best sequel

^^Good Points^^
This got good at the end when Peanutbutter stabbed the other guy (not sure his name). I liked the speakonia, and the storyline was pretty good. I liked the ending as well. It made me roffle.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like how the triangle dealies above the locks kept moving long after the character was done speaking.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

yes the speaking was messed up I had to cut it into 2 parts the movie was originally 24 fps but when I put it into the new document i forgot to change it back to 24 so its at 12 fps the second movie.

[LL-SAW part 1]

Quite entertaining.

^^Good Points^^
Another good Lock Day submission, I can't wait to watch the second part. This had a good storyline that was adapted to a LL way to make it more funny and more enjoyable. The humor was great. I liked Mobile Phone's death scene, that was quite funny, and Fire Hydrant was funny as well, there are many parts in this that are funny. Great job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Most of the time there wasn't a whole lot of animating going on, and there was just still frames with sparse animations.

[Anti-American!! Chomsky]

Pretty good for a political movie

^^Good Points^^
I usually don't enjoy movies that have anything to do with political things, however, I somewhat enjoyed watching this. It's the first time I've seen someone make a movie based on a speech. The subtle background music was a nice touch and the pictures and graphics were well done. This had a good message too and had a strong meaning.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was kind of a snoozer for me though. Got a little boring after a while since it is based on a speech.

[LL lockday 2006]

Ha, this was awesome!

^^Good Points^^
I just cannot wait for Lock Day. It will be a great day of celebration and protecting movies. Back to the review on this movie...this was a pretty darn good movie. I loved the music, SOAD pwns. The graphics were pretty good, especially the animations. I liked the speakonia usage also. The pitch was pretty sweet. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Uhh...This was good. yay.

[Im no superman]

A good start.

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't half bad for your first submission to NG, it's much better than a lot of stuff that gets through the portal. I liked the song and how you made the animations go along with what was happening in the song.

^^Needs Improving^^
Try using some shading in your graphics. It really helps to make a movie look more professional. This could also stand some more definition and detail in it.

[Romeo & Juliet (anim)]

A good summary

^^Good Points^^
I think that for two days of work, you did a pretty darn good job on this movie. It stuck to the storyline of R&J and had some humor in it as well. The animations were pretty good and I also thought the voice overs were very well done. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Of course there are things that could be improved since this was only done in two days, but I'm not going to waste my time. Hell it was done in two days, you couldn't have done much better.

[Star Battles]

Eh, not so good.

^^Good Points^^
I guess the best part about this was the graphics. Some of the drawings were ok, and you got a little creative with shape tweening in parts, and the movement of the stars didn't look so bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't really have a storyline at all. This just shows a bunch of random people and ships doing random things that we have absolutely no idea of the why or who, mainly because one cannot possibly read the beginning introduction. Add a storyline, better animations, more humor, voice overs, and basically everything else that is standard in most flash movies.

[Towel Day]

Pretty good.

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was an interesting movie. I would have never known there is a such thing as Towel Day had it not been for this. I found this to be quite interesting. The explanation of why a towel is usefull is pretty interesting, and the way you animated it was had some humor in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm sure you've already heard enough about the voice, so I will stay away from that. The graphics need some shading or something to make them look less like someone without any skill drew them.

edit-undo responds:

Thank you for your advice. I will consider all reveiws, and maybe re-make this for towel day next year, with much improved graphics, sound, etc. Oh, and i have changed the voice now, it isnt low any more.