FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Battles]

Eh, not so good.

^^Good Points^^
I guess the best part about this was the graphics. Some of the drawings were ok, and you got a little creative with shape tweening in parts, and the movement of the stars didn't look so bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't really have a storyline at all. This just shows a bunch of random people and ships doing random things that we have absolutely no idea of the why or who, mainly because one cannot possibly read the beginning introduction. Add a storyline, better animations, more humor, voice overs, and basically everything else that is standard in most flash movies.

[Towel Day]

Pretty good.

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was an interesting movie. I would have never known there is a such thing as Towel Day had it not been for this. I found this to be quite interesting. The explanation of why a towel is usefull is pretty interesting, and the way you animated it was had some humor in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm sure you've already heard enough about the voice, so I will stay away from that. The graphics need some shading or something to make them look less like someone without any skill drew them.

edit-undo responds:

Thank you for your advice. I will consider all reveiws, and maybe re-make this for towel day next year, with much improved graphics, sound, etc. Oh, and i have changed the voice now, it isnt low any more.

[Western Lights]

This was odd.

^^Good Points^^
I would say the graphics weren't too bad. The character designs were pretty...interesting. The storyline was odd as well, but I am leaning towards liking it more than disliking it since it is pretty unique.. The music was also good. It, like the storyline was odd and unique at the same time.

^^Needs Improving^^
You graphics could stand some improving; mainly this needs more detail. One example would be the scene were the red-faced guy is in his carriage. The far away camera scenes show nothing but the sky, the ground, and a single tree. Something in that area would improve the graphics a whole bunch.

[Conejo Ricardo]

Are you three?

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this movie is the graphics. The initial view of the tower dealy was really defined and looked pretty cool and helped to set the initial scary mood.

^^Needs Improving^^
Fart humor stops getting funny around age ten, which most people on NG are beyond. For me, I didn't find this fart humor funny at all and I think it's just an excuse for lack of good ideas. Next time try and make a storyline that isn't completely childish. Also, the sound effects were not very good, especially towards the end. They just got annoying.

[The Da Vinci Code]

Not bad at all.

^^Good Points^^
The drawings in this were good, as were the animation, but they all looked very two dimensional. I liked the sound effect throughout this, and it contained a good amount of humor. I laughed and the end, and liked the facial expressions you used. This was nice and short, but still delivered.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said above, the graphics are very two dimensional, especially in the initial scene. I liked the sound effects, but this could stand some more of them.

[ascension]

Woah!

^^Good Points^^
This was surprisingly very good. The graphics were very good. The drawings were abstract yet defined, and the animations were very smooth and very realistic. The way you added a three dimensional effect is cool. I was intruiged by the storyline in this, it is really quite interesting. This was very well done and I got quite some entertainment from watching it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think this could have been longer, since it is so cool.

[Loki Clocks Tragic Demise]

I liked it

^^Good Points^^
I thought that the graphics in this were pretty decent. The brick wall had a lot of detail and the animations were clean. I liked the song, it made me laugh. I thought the storyline was kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't say that I liked the way that this looped, just because I don't like loops. Also, there isn't much of a storyline in this movie.

LokiClock responds:

Thank you. Sorry to say, but your suggestions really can't be helped... There weren't any other posts on the board it was based off of, and... well, it's a music loop. What can I say?

[CC - ______ Is Dizzy]

Not the best CC collab

^^Good Points^^
Not good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This collab wasn't very good. The music was extremely annoying, and it is in every part of this collab, which makes it even worse. Each clip was very short and none of them were really funny.

MawOfTheDragon responds:

The music is the entire point.

[Nuns]

Ha, I like this one.

^^Good Points^^
First the graphics. Your drawings are very smooth as are the animations. I liked the shading you used. The graphics are very professional in this movie. I liked the voice overs as well. The skinny nun's was my favorite, though I thought they were all well done. This was pretty funny as well, it gave me a good laugh. It's too bad their aren't more movies such as this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a tad bit long for what was offered. For the length I was expecting a little bit more. Still a good movie nonetheless.