FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL lockday 2006]

Ha, this was awesome!

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I just cannot wait for Lock Day. It will be a great day of celebration and protecting movies. Back to the review on this movie...this was a pretty darn good movie. I loved the music, SOAD pwns. The graphics were pretty good, especially the animations. I liked the speakonia usage also. The pitch was pretty sweet. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Uhh...This was good. yay.

[Im no superman]

A good start.

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This wasn't half bad for your first submission to NG, it's much better than a lot of stuff that gets through the portal. I liked the song and how you made the animations go along with what was happening in the song.

^^Needs Improving^^
Try using some shading in your graphics. It really helps to make a movie look more professional. This could also stand some more definition and detail in it.

[Romeo & Juliet (anim)]

A good summary

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I think that for two days of work, you did a pretty darn good job on this movie. It stuck to the storyline of R&J and had some humor in it as well. The animations were pretty good and I also thought the voice overs were very well done. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Of course there are things that could be improved since this was only done in two days, but I'm not going to waste my time. Hell it was done in two days, you couldn't have done much better.

[Adolf N' Woodrow 02]

Better than the first.

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I thought the way you made this one was much more clever than the first. The picture itself was a little gruesome, but I guess you got your point across.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, another very short movie by you bunch of guys. I'd really like to see some more similarities in each movie, one just doesn't cut it. And you could have added some kind of funky music to the actual movie part of this.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

The music in this was great. Are you deaf?

[Star Battles]

Eh, not so good.

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I guess the best part about this was the graphics. Some of the drawings were ok, and you got a little creative with shape tweening in parts, and the movement of the stars didn't look so bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't really have a storyline at all. This just shows a bunch of random people and ships doing random things that we have absolutely no idea of the why or who, mainly because one cannot possibly read the beginning introduction. Add a storyline, better animations, more humor, voice overs, and basically everything else that is standard in most flash movies.

[Towel Day]

Pretty good.

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I thought this was an interesting movie. I would have never known there is a such thing as Towel Day had it not been for this. I found this to be quite interesting. The explanation of why a towel is usefull is pretty interesting, and the way you animated it was had some humor in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm sure you've already heard enough about the voice, so I will stay away from that. The graphics need some shading or something to make them look less like someone without any skill drew them.

edit-undo responds:

Thank you for your advice. I will consider all reveiws, and maybe re-make this for towel day next year, with much improved graphics, sound, etc. Oh, and i have changed the voice now, it isnt low any more.

[Western Lights]

This was odd.

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I would say the graphics weren't too bad. The character designs were pretty...interesting. The storyline was odd as well, but I am leaning towards liking it more than disliking it since it is pretty unique.. The music was also good. It, like the storyline was odd and unique at the same time.

^^Needs Improving^^
You graphics could stand some improving; mainly this needs more detail. One example would be the scene were the red-faced guy is in his carriage. The far away camera scenes show nothing but the sky, the ground, and a single tree. Something in that area would improve the graphics a whole bunch.

[Conejo Ricardo]

Are you three?

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The best part about this movie is the graphics. The initial view of the tower dealy was really defined and looked pretty cool and helped to set the initial scary mood.

^^Needs Improving^^
Fart humor stops getting funny around age ten, which most people on NG are beyond. For me, I didn't find this fart humor funny at all and I think it's just an excuse for lack of good ideas. Next time try and make a storyline that isn't completely childish. Also, the sound effects were not very good, especially towards the end. They just got annoying.

[The Da Vinci Code]

Not bad at all.

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The drawings in this were good, as were the animation, but they all looked very two dimensional. I liked the sound effect throughout this, and it contained a good amount of humor. I laughed and the end, and liked the facial expressions you used. This was nice and short, but still delivered.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said above, the graphics are very two dimensional, especially in the initial scene. I liked the sound effects, but this could stand some more of them.

[ascension]

Woah!

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This was surprisingly very good. The graphics were very good. The drawings were abstract yet defined, and the animations were very smooth and very realistic. The way you added a three dimensional effect is cool. I was intruiged by the storyline in this, it is really quite interesting. This was very well done and I got quite some entertainment from watching it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think this could have been longer, since it is so cool.