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[WOS TT 1]

Not so bad.

^^Good Points^^
When I first saw the menu, I was pretty impressed by that. I liked how you added animations to the menu and how the characters were buttons, and you can never go wrong with "Running in the 90's". NEVER! To sum up my thoughts on each part, lets say that I enjoyed all the parts to the right, and didn't enjoy the parts to the left. Pineapple's part had a good point to it, and explained what the heck WOS was. Back of a guy's head's part just looked funny. 20-sided die's part had good music as did Italy's part, which is why I liked them.

^^Needs Improving^^
Whole left side is kind of lame. Flashlight's was very boring, and the other two were just two very short loops.

Arskagarf responds:

I <3 you man, you need to review us every time. You may say that Flashlights was boring but look at how well drawn it is. Also, the back of the head is Arskagarf.

[Ketchupy Ham]

Neat

^^Good Points^^
This was a neat little film. The animations were relatively smoothe, and this had lots of humor in it. I liked all the references to other movies like "Harpoon!" and all the others. I liked the music. It was pretty intense and went well with the movie. Good job.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't really have much of a storyline. I guess it doesn't need one, but this stuff is just completely random. Also, in the beginning, the Tetris pieces are drawn a little weird.

LordOfKetchup responds:

cool thanks for the thought out review. i appreciate it man.

[Lays the Cactus]

Heh.

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was a decent movie. It was nice and short, but still had some good humor and a good storyline. I liked the voice overs and the script, I found this pretty funny. The fight scene was my favorite part, and the ending was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could stand some improvement, but they are still pretty good.

LordOfKetchup responds:

Ok thanks I guess. I don't see how my background wasn't ULTIMATE. But okay maybe. The characters are actually from other flash movies so check them out.

[Poop another day]

Pube muppit with better graphics/storyline!

^^Good Points^^
Seeing how I am a big fan of the Pube Muppit, this kind of movie is right down my alley. I liked how you kept the characteristics of a pube muppit movie like the rambling and the "What kind of establishment..." quote. I found this very funny and liked the effort that you put into the storyline and graphics. Nice job.

[End of Days Trailer]

Impressive

^^Good Points^^
I think it looks pretty obvious that you spent quite some time preparing this trailer and making the movie. I like how you presented this with the static television effect, it really helps portray the mood that the final movie will have.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's hard for me to get a good idea of what is going to happen in the movie. I'm not exactly sure what is going to happen from this trailer. You could have revealed a bit more. Also, the sound is abusive to the ears.

[LL - Grim Symphony]

Nifty!

^^Good Points^^
A good movie. This is pretty unique, and your cast of characters is both long and well-known. I liked the different death scenes, they were all pretty unique, and the way you synced actions with the music is very keen. This is definitely a worthwhile movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The constant zoomed out view doesn't always look so good. It would have been nice if you had zoomed in from time to time to show the viewer a little more detail and give youself some more to work with.

[The Life of a Brick]

It's ok.

^^Good Points^^
Music choice is excellent. Laid back and casual, just like this movie. The drawings were pretty good (or atleast better than I can do) and the idea is good. I liked the ending, it made me laugh a little bit. Good idea, and a good flash film.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use more shading to make it more realistic.

[-=-Mayo Song-=-]

Nice song

^^Good Points^^
I liked the song. It has a great beat and has some funny lyrics. I would say that this is a good song to base a flash film on.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are really terrible. They are 95% real life pictures that are really crappy looking. You did very little editing of the picture, which makes them look pretty bad (like the white around the mayo jar). This really doesn't show a whole lot of talent.

[I don't even]

yeah

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't bad at all. I liked your shading and the animations weren't bad either. I thought the ending was kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
As you probably have already found out, this is a bit short. You could have added some scenes from before where the movie started to make it a whole bunch better.

BloodyFuel responds:

Yeah well as I said I was busy...

[LL- Bustafruit]

Eh?

^^Good Points^^
By reading the Author's Comments, this movie becomes slightly clearer and a tad bit funnier. I guess Bustafruit's friend keeps him down by exploding him? That's kind of a funny idea, but just not a good movie. The drawings aren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was way too short. From what I deduced about this movie and said above, this could have been a much better movie had it been longer with some more plot details.

Stressball responds:

what's a plot?