FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MM - Bullies]

Not half bad!

^^Good Points^^
The most impressive part in this movie is the graphics. I thought the logo you made was original, and still had lots of style and good coloring. Other drawings were good as well. The camera angles and perspective changes are pretty keen as well. I liked how the music changed too, it went well with what was going on.

^^Needs Improving^^
Though the music was good, it was a little overpowering. Also, this doesn't really explain a lot of what is going on. hopefully we will find out what is going on with this kid in a later episode.

[The 80's Videogame Crash]

*falls asleep*

^^Good Points^^
I want to believe that you put a good amount of effort into this. The jokes in this movie were kind of funny. For example, the Rosie O'Donnel joke.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was so boring. The monotonous voice generator you used doesn't help at all. This was way too long, and just seemed to go on and on. The graphics weren't very good either. Your character designs looked like crap and were just simple shapes or crap sprites. I also don't see the logic behind the proceed buttons. They seem to be in some places but not in others and form no pattern to their origin. Also, the long paragraphs should not be read aloud. It takes far too long.

Good idea, but just not a very good movie.

[WOS <3's LL]

Nice music

^^Good Points^^
Another good collab. Though this is a lot smaller than your newer collab, the parts were still of pretty good quality. I liked the menu. It looks cool with all the animations, and the song is funny and catchy. I liked Flashlight's part the best. It was funny to see a clock and a lock standing off against each other. Arskagarf's part has great music (love that song) as does that last one (not sure of the name). This was a pretty funny collab and I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Didn't really like the animation in Arskagarf's part. Just a simple loop with some transforming, nothing really special.

Arskagarf responds:

Thanks for another lovely review. We need more competant members, such as yourself, here on newgrounds. I'm sorry you didn't like my part, I was stumped as to what to do. But seeing as how clock day is in august, you'll have something to look forward to.

[WOS TT 1]

Not so bad.

^^Good Points^^
When I first saw the menu, I was pretty impressed by that. I liked how you added animations to the menu and how the characters were buttons, and you can never go wrong with "Running in the 90's". NEVER! To sum up my thoughts on each part, lets say that I enjoyed all the parts to the right, and didn't enjoy the parts to the left. Pineapple's part had a good point to it, and explained what the heck WOS was. Back of a guy's head's part just looked funny. 20-sided die's part had good music as did Italy's part, which is why I liked them.

^^Needs Improving^^
Whole left side is kind of lame. Flashlight's was very boring, and the other two were just two very short loops.

Arskagarf responds:

I <3 you man, you need to review us every time. You may say that Flashlights was boring but look at how well drawn it is. Also, the back of the head is Arskagarf.

[Ketchupy Ham]

Neat

^^Good Points^^
This was a neat little film. The animations were relatively smoothe, and this had lots of humor in it. I liked all the references to other movies like "Harpoon!" and all the others. I liked the music. It was pretty intense and went well with the movie. Good job.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't really have much of a storyline. I guess it doesn't need one, but this stuff is just completely random. Also, in the beginning, the Tetris pieces are drawn a little weird.

LordOfKetchup responds:

cool thanks for the thought out review. i appreciate it man.

[Lays the Cactus]

Heh.

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was a decent movie. It was nice and short, but still had some good humor and a good storyline. I liked the voice overs and the script, I found this pretty funny. The fight scene was my favorite part, and the ending was funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could stand some improvement, but they are still pretty good.

LordOfKetchup responds:

Ok thanks I guess. I don't see how my background wasn't ULTIMATE. But okay maybe. The characters are actually from other flash movies so check them out.

[Poop another day]

Pube muppit with better graphics/storyline!

^^Good Points^^
Seeing how I am a big fan of the Pube Muppit, this kind of movie is right down my alley. I liked how you kept the characteristics of a pube muppit movie like the rambling and the "What kind of establishment..." quote. I found this very funny and liked the effort that you put into the storyline and graphics. Nice job.

[End of Days Trailer]

Impressive

^^Good Points^^
I think it looks pretty obvious that you spent quite some time preparing this trailer and making the movie. I like how you presented this with the static television effect, it really helps portray the mood that the final movie will have.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's hard for me to get a good idea of what is going to happen in the movie. I'm not exactly sure what is going to happen from this trailer. You could have revealed a bit more. Also, the sound is abusive to the ears.

[LL - Grim Symphony]

Nifty!

^^Good Points^^
A good movie. This is pretty unique, and your cast of characters is both long and well-known. I liked the different death scenes, they were all pretty unique, and the way you synced actions with the music is very keen. This is definitely a worthwhile movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The constant zoomed out view doesn't always look so good. It would have been nice if you had zoomed in from time to time to show the viewer a little more detail and give youself some more to work with.

[The Life of a Brick]

It's ok.

^^Good Points^^
Music choice is excellent. Laid back and casual, just like this movie. The drawings were pretty good (or atleast better than I can do) and the idea is good. I liked the ending, it made me laugh a little bit. Good idea, and a good flash film.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use more shading to make it more realistic.