FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Thee Marshmello Show]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings and animations weren't too bad; they were definitely what saved this movie from being deleted. You show some good effort in that department of this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics were really lame though. You had no background drawings or anything to enhance this at all graphically, and your characters being marshmellos doesn't really help either. The storyline was pretty stupid, not very funny or entertaining, which is another major thing you need to work on. You've got some graphical skill, but need to enhance that with storyline and more drawings!

[SM-Bring it all back Pt2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Better than the first episode, mainly because it is a bit longer, as you said, almost finished. The music was cool, and I liked the upbeat feeling throughout this. The new parts you added were pretty well done, especially the fight scene with PillowUzi, that was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Still, an unfinished project, I don't know why you don't just take a few days to finish it up instead of making another incomplete version. As long as you don't delete any of these I really don't care though.

RampageSun responds:

Thank you Lieutenant Colonel milinko *salutes to you* It will defenately be finnished I swear to that,Yes PillowUzi fight was a good touch for the animation and thought it would be good to have some humore into it,again thanks for the Posotive review! <3
~RampageSun~

[SM-Bring it all Back]

K

^^Good Points^^
You made a good impression on me with the preloader in this movie, which is very pleasing graphically. A good preloader is always a good place to start. The graphics throughout this movie were just as good. Good drawings and nice animations. They went along with the song as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm really disappointed that you guys didn't bother to finish the song, or at least stop in a better place. If you want to make a name for yourself, then you should definitely make full movies that people will enjoy more.

Review Request Club.

RampageSun responds:

Me and the SM are happy you like our stuyle and graphic layout on our animations its also make me happy that you are honest and mature that you dident leave mean review but instead you are honest and constructive in your point.
Yes I do say we did mess up on this and did not finnish it and it dident finnish with the song but we will fix this and make it longer to the end of the music.
again thank you for your honest review.
~RampageClock~

[Wacky's period]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was actually pretty entertaining for the length that it had. I thought it was really funny how you wrote in the diary that "things weren't so bad" and then when you actually animated them they were much worse. The bleeding part was the best though, that made me laugh. The sound effects were perfect too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics could definitely use improving. You had a lot of bitmap images, which were very pixilated, and didn't look good with Flash drawings on top of them.

[wheatclock distortion 02]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was even better than the first episode. I really thought this episode was much funnier, with the speeches made by each character. I have to say that was a very creative conversation. Again, the graphics are very good, excellent coloring and very unique. The music went with the strange graphics as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really nothing at this point that I can think of. Basically same as the last episode.

[wheatclock distortion 01]

K

^^Good Points^^
The most memorable part about this movie is definitely the drawing style. The style of shading and drawing you have in this movie is one that I have never seen, and it really creates and eerie mood and is extremely unique. I liked that part of this movie. Some of the movie was funny too, like "going interneting" and "buttering bread" which both made me laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
I felt that the graphics, as I said, created an eerie mood, but in my opinion that doesn't really fit with the mood that the storyline created, which was funnier and a little less serious.

[Crazy Chicken]

K

^^Good Points^^
Once you can look beyond the terrible graphics, this movie has some redeeming points. Parts of this were funny, like the scene with the white house, which just sounded funny to me. The concept is not too bad either, at least it's original.

^^Needs Improving^
The graphics were terrible, as I said above. You need to learn how to trace bitmaps next time, so you can get rid of the white backgrounds to all of your images. This way, you can animate smoother and you can also have more backgrounds as well. Also, work on the animations, they were pretty choppy.

[Larry]

K

^^Good Points^^
Oh, this movie was just sad.

^^Needs Improving^^
You did just about everything wrong in this movie. First, you're voice is not a good voice to have in Flash movies. It is far too high and you do a terrible job of acting with your voice. Next, the humor is incredibly immature and would probably appeal more to six year olds. The graphics were questionable. Really boring drawings and not much in the way of shading or animations. This was just bad.