FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SM-Bring it all Back]

K

^^Good Points^^
You made a good impression on me with the preloader in this movie, which is very pleasing graphically. A good preloader is always a good place to start. The graphics throughout this movie were just as good. Good drawings and nice animations. They went along with the song as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm really disappointed that you guys didn't bother to finish the song, or at least stop in a better place. If you want to make a name for yourself, then you should definitely make full movies that people will enjoy more.

Review Request Club.

RampageSun responds:

Me and the SM are happy you like our stuyle and graphic layout on our animations its also make me happy that you are honest and mature that you dident leave mean review but instead you are honest and constructive in your point.
Yes I do say we did mess up on this and did not finnish it and it dident finnish with the song but we will fix this and make it longer to the end of the music.
again thank you for your honest review.
~RampageClock~

[Wacky's period]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was actually pretty entertaining for the length that it had. I thought it was really funny how you wrote in the diary that "things weren't so bad" and then when you actually animated them they were much worse. The bleeding part was the best though, that made me laugh. The sound effects were perfect too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics could definitely use improving. You had a lot of bitmap images, which were very pixilated, and didn't look good with Flash drawings on top of them.

[wheatclock distortion 02]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was even better than the first episode. I really thought this episode was much funnier, with the speeches made by each character. I have to say that was a very creative conversation. Again, the graphics are very good, excellent coloring and very unique. The music went with the strange graphics as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really nothing at this point that I can think of. Basically same as the last episode.

[wheatclock distortion 01]

K

^^Good Points^^
The most memorable part about this movie is definitely the drawing style. The style of shading and drawing you have in this movie is one that I have never seen, and it really creates and eerie mood and is extremely unique. I liked that part of this movie. Some of the movie was funny too, like "going interneting" and "buttering bread" which both made me laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
I felt that the graphics, as I said, created an eerie mood, but in my opinion that doesn't really fit with the mood that the storyline created, which was funnier and a little less serious.

[Crazy Chicken]

K

^^Good Points^^
Once you can look beyond the terrible graphics, this movie has some redeeming points. Parts of this were funny, like the scene with the white house, which just sounded funny to me. The concept is not too bad either, at least it's original.

^^Needs Improving^
The graphics were terrible, as I said above. You need to learn how to trace bitmaps next time, so you can get rid of the white backgrounds to all of your images. This way, you can animate smoother and you can also have more backgrounds as well. Also, work on the animations, they were pretty choppy.

[Larry]

K

^^Good Points^^
Oh, this movie was just sad.

^^Needs Improving^^
You did just about everything wrong in this movie. First, you're voice is not a good voice to have in Flash movies. It is far too high and you do a terrible job of acting with your voice. Next, the humor is incredibly immature and would probably appeal more to six year olds. The graphics were questionable. Really boring drawings and not much in the way of shading or animations. This was just bad.

[Planet of Robots]

K

^^Good Points^^
The art in this movie was well made. I liked the very dark tones in the color, and the drawings were above average as well. The music was also cool. Set a neat mood for the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not sure I really like the storyline in this movie. It was a short movie, which isn't necessarily bad, but you developed no storyline at all really. I don't really see what you are trying to accomplish with the storyline. Robots are unable to make their own societies? Not very interesting.

[why newgrounds?.]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty well made. I've never seen one quite like it, that is actually a tribute to the strange things on NG. The movie was actually kind of funny, how you showcased the things on NG that you like, for example the "weird porn". I liked the music, and the screenshots and animations were high quality.

^^Needs Improving^^
You basically took 3/4 of the time talking about the question at hand--why you are on NG--yet didn't take nearly enough time in comparison to answer the question.

[Srawberry Clock's RUN!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Interesting to see a three dimensional movie like this, I've seen very few. I am glad you made the filesize a little bit higher instead of sacrificing quality, good move there. The quality was in fact quite high. I liked the speakonia, and the ending was pretty funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly, I wouldn't mind waiting much longer for this to load and have a longer storyline to watch. You should really try this style with a better storyline with more going on. This seems like more of a test.