FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Another fight scene]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie wasn't too bad. The fighting scenes weren't too badly done, some good fighting in there. I also liked the sound effects, they were the best part. Very well fit and appropriate.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just a generic movie here, nothing really sets it apart from any other stick fighting movie. It takes a lot to stand out, but the animations were just average, and other graphics were just mediocre compared to the best stick fighting movies.

[A Newgrounds X-mas Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie at all. The idea is unique, not like most of the Christmas movies made recently. I liked the idea of the SWF being the main character and doing his thing. The music was good throughout too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Music quality was good, but I would suggest fading out one song and fading into the next, just to make things go a little bit smoother. Also, this movie lacking sound effects was very lame. You should have added some more to this in the sound effects. Also, try to work on your animations, they seemed to be very elementary.

Review Request Club.

Dash-02 responds:

I totally agree with you on fading out the music the problem is that I dont know how to so I just stop it but it would be better like you said.

[Declaration of Revocation]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was pretty funny, even though the jokes aren't yours, I still had some fun watching it and reading everything. The text seemed to go at a good pace in most spots, and the music was a nice addition to this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, you really did focus on the jokes instead of doing any animating, which is what Flash is all about. Work on some animating skills and make a real movie. This was just text that you took at put to some google images!

Review Request Club

Sidorio responds:

Actually some jokes are mine, that's why it says improvised by Sidorio in the opening bit.

[Playstation 3 commerical]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the style you had for graphics. The brick wall you drew looked very good, and so did most of the other graphics and animations in this. The voice overs were good in this movie as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...I don't really like this commercial too much. I'm not sure what you are saying. Santa will kill himself if he gets a Wii? But that doesn't make much sense to me, so I am kind of in the dark with this one.

[Angry Faic Christmas]

K

^^Good Points^^
Graphically this movie was pretty impressive. The animating was the best part. Most noticeably in the fire and the snoring of Angry Face. I thought the animations were very well done. The music and sound effects were well placed too, and the storyline wasn't too bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a movie with Angry Face to be a little more interesting. This was very short and it wasn't very funny. Angry didn't seem to be as angry as he usually seems to be, which disappointed me.

ToonCastleTV responds:

It was Christmas, even angry faic gets happy around then!

I made this in 3 days so...

[Thee Marshmello Show]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings and animations weren't too bad; they were definitely what saved this movie from being deleted. You show some good effort in that department of this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics were really lame though. You had no background drawings or anything to enhance this at all graphically, and your characters being marshmellos doesn't really help either. The storyline was pretty stupid, not very funny or entertaining, which is another major thing you need to work on. You've got some graphical skill, but need to enhance that with storyline and more drawings!