FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ScareCrow's Clockmas]

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^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part. You drew the characters with a lot of detail, seems like you put some effort into that.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall, not a very good movie in my opinion. Based on a YTMND that I did not find very funny at all, but besides that, the joke isn't original, which is annoying. The sound quality also isn't very good either. It looks like you rushed the background too, just to get this published and on NG. I really didn't like the movie.

MetalDart responds:

K.

[What's your problem?!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was decent. The voice overs were well done, I liked the different tones you used, since they were kind of funny. Also, the joke was funny too, I like your style.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little too short for my liking, and I usually like quick movies. This one, however, just doesn't have enough. It all focuses around one small joke, which is funny, but definitely is not enough for me to like a movie devoted to.

Casualty responds:

You're right on all your points, it's just that I made this in half an hour with no real goal. Thanks for the review dude!

[Santa exists?]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess the drawings weren't too bad. I liked how you drew Santa, and his walking wasn't too poorly done. The little twinkles you added were a nice touch. I liked the music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline is a little bit tacky. Seems like you are just trying to preserve an old legend, and honestly, I wasn't too impressed or entertained by the story. The humor was a little childish, just not something I like. Watch your spelling too, you spelled "why" wrong :s.

[Bbq-ish christmas]

K

^^Good Points^^
It's always nice to see an appearance by BBQ, who doesn't come around too much anymore. Dressing up as santa is really an interesting thing for BBQ to be doing, and quite scary looking! I liked the appearance of Mr. T, and his sound clip was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the storyline really wasn't too great. It was really random, Mr. T was completely unexpected. I was hoping for more to focus on BBQ, and I really thought this would be a little bit longer with more storyline.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Yeah ive been a little lazy lately. But even i need a break every once in a while.

[Merry Christmas Card]

K

^^Good Points^^
A mildly entertaining movie, though it puts a good feeling inside of you. A cute little movie. I liked the little star fellows and the decorations had some personality as well. The music was great, definitely a classic tune. It was neat to see the scene develop as you made it.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, it doesn't offer much in entertainment. It's cute, and a nice welcome to the seasons, but nothing too interesting happens. Also, since it's so short we definitely need to compress the music a bit.

[LL: Christmas Elavator]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was pretty funny, and packed into a nice short package. The graphics were well done. Nice zooming effects, and good shading in your characters and backgrounds. The storyline was funny, especially at the end when Spoon Lock went crazy and jumped out of the window.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the storyline though, it doesn't make much sense. Why would they just randomly shut down the elevators? I guess it's just something that happens in Locktopia. Also, this barely has anything to do with Christmas, and definitely not enough to display the name in your title.

[Letters]

K

^^Good Points^^
I found this to be a very interesting movie. I was a bit bored by the beginning, but it immediately turned into a large brawl between all of the letters. It was really neat to see everything unfold in such a quick manner. The fighting was pretty creative, in fact the whole concept of the movie is creative.

^^Needs Improving^^
The play button in the beginning was really hard to click. It took me a while to click. You definitely need to put a white rectangle behind the letters to make the play button easier to click. I noticed that you used the same sound effects over and over too, which was annoying.