FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL: Christmas Elavator]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was pretty funny, and packed into a nice short package. The graphics were well done. Nice zooming effects, and good shading in your characters and backgrounds. The storyline was funny, especially at the end when Spoon Lock went crazy and jumped out of the window.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the storyline though, it doesn't make much sense. Why would they just randomly shut down the elevators? I guess it's just something that happens in Locktopia. Also, this barely has anything to do with Christmas, and definitely not enough to display the name in your title.

[Letters]

K

^^Good Points^^
I found this to be a very interesting movie. I was a bit bored by the beginning, but it immediately turned into a large brawl between all of the letters. It was really neat to see everything unfold in such a quick manner. The fighting was pretty creative, in fact the whole concept of the movie is creative.

^^Needs Improving^^
The play button in the beginning was really hard to click. It took me a while to click. You definitely need to put a white rectangle behind the letters to make the play button easier to click. I noticed that you used the same sound effects over and over too, which was annoying.

[the reason we are alive]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very good art in this. That was a really unique drawing you had there, and it had a lot of detail in it. Nothing short of any artistic work you have done. I like how it pulsed with the heartbeat sound effect too, that was kind of freaky. Overall this was freaky, but I respect the artistic work.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, not much of a movie here. It's a very small file, which is good, but that means there isn't much of a movie here. It's just a very short loop with fancy graphics.

[the INTERNAUT]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, definitely a very unique image. I'm not sure what exactly is going on in this, but it's really quite interesting. I can only imaging what is going on in those VR goggles. The music added to the humor as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seems more like a BBS post than a movie. It's just a picture with some music, not really a movie at all, and because of that I can't really rate this too highly. Sure it was funny and all, but it just doesn't show much time and effort.

DanPaladick responds:

i am truly envious of your reviewing abilities, thank you for being non-biased and informative

[Eggcup's Bad Christmas]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good short, I'm glad you made it. Everything in this was very simplistic, which made the file size very low and quick to load. Even though it was short and simple, the storyline was still pretty funny. I wasn't expecting that poor peggy to get stabbed by a sword :(

^^Needs Improving^^
I noticed in your spinning green/red thing behind the sock was a little poorly made. There were some white spots in there, and the lines didn't really intersect at one point at all.

[SM:SunMafiaIntro (Undone)]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music. Not often I hear a song like "Festival of Ghost" in a submission, so good job on having a unique tune. The graphics weren't too bad. Your characters were drawn good, and some other parts had good details too, like the lightsabers. The animations weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seems to be just a bunch of random events to me. There isn't much concurrence in the events that unfold in this movie, which I didn't like. And really, I didn't like the idea of a Sun Mafia. Just seems like a cheap ripoff to me. So far, you haven't earned my respect.

Review Request Club.

RaspberrySun responds:

...TheSunMafia...
Is a group,which wants to help the cc and make allies with them. thanks for the review though.

[Santa's Watching]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked this movie. It was quick, which is always good to see among some of the longer movies today. The animations were good, especially the explosion, I liked that part, and it made me laugh. The sound effects were the best part though. It was neat how you made Santa's sleigh sound like a jet of some sort, and his evil laugh was comical.

^^Needs Improving^^
I just think that the initial scene with the house does not have as impressive graphics as the rest. It just looks like you started this a while ago then got more used to the program and created better graphics. Try to make them more consistent.

[LL: Christmas Special]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings and shading was pretty impressive. You put a lot of realistic gradients and shading in here to make it more realistic looking. I even liked the style of drawings in the Lock that forgot Christmas.

^^Needs Improving^^
There seems to be a big problem with the sound for this movie. During the lock that forgot Christmas, there were some voice overs and sound effects that played, which didn't seem to fit, and then after that scene, there were no sound effects or voices, which were played a tad bit too early. This was a very huge flaw. Not to mention that the humor in this wasn't really my style. Very dry humor.

[Something Fishy]

K

^^Good Points^^
A rather unique movie. The animating style is definitely unique. It seemed more just like snapshots taken over and over and then played in sequence, which is a neat thing. I actually liked the animations, since I thought they were kind of humorous. The drawings were pretty cute, especially the cat. Storyline was cute also, and kind of clever.

^^Needs Improving^^
I liked the song, since it sounded like a cat meowing, but towards the end it got really obnoxious. Also, it seemed to cut off a little before I had expected it too. Made the flash seem unfinished.

Review Request Club

[The Gimp]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought this movie was kind of funny. Thought it would be much worse with the comments it has gotten. It was kind of funny how the guy kept falling out. The sound effects and voices weren't too bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't say that the image quality was even that good, which was the featured graphics in this. The voice overs could have been a little clearer as well. Also, very short. You could have come up with some more things to do.