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[~BB~ Super Adventure #2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Surprisingly, this was better than most Steve Irwin tributes, especially the ones that came out shortly after his death. This one at least had a little bit of humor in the end, with dancing Steve.

^^Needs Improving^^
The screamer part was a little bit distasteful, it didn't scare me one bit, so it failed its mission, plus it lowered my thoughts about this movie a bit. I would have been much more optimistic had you simply put the dancing steve part instead of the screamer.

Rigormort1s responds:

The screamer was supposed to funny.

Thanks for the review.

[Clock Crew Wazzup!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Meh. You had a few different clocks added in here, which was pretty cool. I like how you moved from clock to clock along with the sound clip too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This has been done before, quite a few times, and you didn't do much with this. You basically did the bare minimum as far as animation goes. Basically you just animated the triangles that show talking. It would have been better if you had some more animations or background drawings.

[I miss spring!]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music and sound effects in this movie were both pretty well done. The music gave a good springy mood to it, very good choice. The drawings weren't too bad either. I liked the layering you used, and the ending to this movie was pretty funny. That guy really likes the flowers!

^^Needs Improving^^
It's a bit short to me. You didn't really develop much storyline, and even though that is probably what you wanted, many people aren't too keen on such things.

[Fishy Go Swim]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the art was half decent. Fish clock is a new one, never saw that before. The music was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't quite as advanced as you had described it to be :( Really you had the volume of the music pretty low, and the whole movie seemed to me to just be the same MC's played over and over to the music. Really no storyline in this and not very entertaining after a few seconds.

[Wazzap! Haha!You're Dead!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't too bad. You had some decent drawings, especially the ones that are far away and very dark, those looked cool. The music was good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
All of the text goes away way too fast, I couldn't read half of the stuff that was on the screen. You could have use some of the sound clips from the actual commercials, that would have been much better than just having music in this.

[Seedot Was Caught]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good movie, I think it deserves a higher score. It was a good song for an animutation movie, and you did a good job with syncing up some of the animations with the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
This needs more flashing colors and definitely some more sprites or something going on to that crazy music.

[Man With A Knife]

K

^^Good Points^^
You certainly gave this a decent try. The graphics aren't bad if this actually was your first time fiddling around in Flash.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, you have no sound, which this could have a lot of. Also, random violence isn't really entertaining or fun at all to most people, and this was just the worst. You could work on the graphics with some more realistic animations and also some shading would be nice.