FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Matrix Bamboozled]

K

^^Good Points^^
I really liked the whole story that you told here, with the storybook type and almost lyrical style. The words flowed well and it was pretty funny too. I liked certain jokes like "The KFC man" standing for the Architect (I think). Good drawings too, they were funny at times.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't do to much animation other than a camera type effect going over the drawings. I would have liked to see more animations in the drawings.

[Is It a plane? Is it a..?]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty impressive. I liked the little intro you added into this, and overall, you used some good effects to create perspective, and overall, graphics were impressive.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like the voice overs. They were way too high, which just sounded a little bit annoying to me. You could have made this longer, I know it is meant to be short, but even the intro is longer.

[A Friendly Squirrel]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were pretty good, I especially liked how you drew the squirrel while he was getting it on. The sound effects were pretty good, and the ending was funny with that guy that saw the whole ordeal.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie was a little sick, and I actually was expecting no less from it and predicted this quite well. But maybe that says more bad about me than this movie!

JunkYardAnimations responds:

appreciate the thorough review <3

[She's Ready To Dump!]

K

^^Good Points^^
The title of this movie definitely drew me in, it was really an interesting movie. I laughed at the girl, and the guy's reaction to her pooping herself, very funny movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voice overs weren't very good. You have a good voice for each character, but when you start to talk loudly, the microphone messes it up and your voices don't sound natural one bit.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

i fixed the sound, check it now u beauty!!!

[System Wars ---Trailer]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was cool how you drew actual characters to represent the consoles in the battles. Most people who have made a system war movie have simply used the consoles. Your drawings were very cool, how they all incorporated parts of the system, and you even drew out the controllers and consoles with great detail.

^^Needs Improving^^
The idea seems a little unoriginal to me, but nonetheless, I think you will make good work of it.

[U R A PIRATE]

K

^^Good Points^^
I've never seen an animation to the whole song of this, and it was quite interesting. The song was great, and you animated very well to it. I liked how you actually broke apart most of the words, like "Fiddle DD" and "pie rat", which was funny. The animations were great, but the best part had to be the "WTF are they saying" scene, which made me laugh. Definitely a good movie here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations were a little slow, you could have definitely added some more frames into this and made things a lot smoother. Also, perhaps some more careful drawings, as some times I had no idea what was going on.

[FrankThePineapple0012]

K

^^Good Points^^
The intro to this movie was pretty good, I'm glad to see you are making some new episodes, as I've liked this series from the start. The penguin with rainbow eyes was pretty cool, and it was funny how the movie ended with everyone exploding, then a sad face.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't like how the background isn't drawn, just a picture, and also the sound effects were pretty low quality and didn't sound very natural.

REVIV responds:

mmm thanks for the review

[This means War]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good message in this movie. The SS is definitely superior, since they make actual movies, in fact, I started one that I have yet to finish, but will. Anyway, the movie was pretty cool. It showed that the SM will come back and make some more movies. This movie was well done, good graphics and good music in this too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought this could have used some sound effects. The music was pretty much all that was going on. Pretty good movie though.

UMD-Sun responds:

SS then SM? confused get
also, it was a music video thing, shoulda written that, that's why there was no sfx