FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wazzap! Haha!You're Dead!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't too bad. You had some decent drawings, especially the ones that are far away and very dark, those looked cool. The music was good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
All of the text goes away way too fast, I couldn't read half of the stuff that was on the screen. You could have use some of the sound clips from the actual commercials, that would have been much better than just having music in this.

[Seedot Was Caught]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good movie, I think it deserves a higher score. It was a good song for an animutation movie, and you did a good job with syncing up some of the animations with the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
This needs more flashing colors and definitely some more sprites or something going on to that crazy music.

[Man With A Knife]

K

^^Good Points^^
You certainly gave this a decent try. The graphics aren't bad if this actually was your first time fiddling around in Flash.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, you have no sound, which this could have a lot of. Also, random violence isn't really entertaining or fun at all to most people, and this was just the worst. You could work on the graphics with some more realistic animations and also some shading would be nice.

[Newgrounds in a Nutshell]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was pretty good, I liked it. Also, I can see the humor and concept you were trying to get across here, but not too funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you are really selling NG quite short. NG has a ton of great content on here, and to be quite honest, it is submissions like this that really make NG a worse place to make people think so lowly of NG. You should really try to help if you think it is a problem!

[Super Amazing Birthday]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very good birthday movie here. It was pretty funny how you made this. I liked the many characters you stuck in here and their superpowers as well. The drawings were cute, and the voice overs were very cool and very well done. I especially like how you have the next button to skip over certain parts of the movie if you want.

^^Needs Improving^^
I sure didn't think that the character intro part was going to actually be the full movie, which disappointed me.

notorious responds:

Yeah i was actually considering doing a whole animation thing with them, but it was already late and i was lazzzzzzy.

[I Drink Concentrated OJ!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This had great music for a animutation movie. The lyrics could not be understood, and it had a funky beat, to which you put lots of cool images and animated them well. The quality of this was unusually high for an animutation movie, especially in the images.

^^Needs Improving^^
What makes a great animutation movie is that you animate to the foreign lyrics as though they are English. You need to try to interpret more what the lyrics say in English and then animate that.

[Benny Clock: Chase Theme]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was good. Benny Hill chase scenes are usually pretty fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really not impressing at all. These scenes are more for just a short part in a movie, not a full length movie. This one wasn't even that well made. All you did was tween the characters back and forth, and nothing interesting really happened. Very poor background drawing too.

[Teh Coinz]

K

^^Good Points^^
I'm pretty impressed with this movie. You had great animations, with a ton of V-cam usage, which really added a lot to this. The sound effects varied a bunch, and were funny too. You got pretty creative with this and had a bunch of good ideas and scenarios.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, you didn't do any background drawings except for what was absolutely necessary, and the white background just doesn't cut it anymore. Also, the ending didn't really satisfy the storyline, seemed to end pretty suddenly.

[Final Fantasy Island(inc)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some parts of this weren't too poorly done. You had some detail in the background drawings, which was a plus, and the voice overs weren't too bad. Some random humor, like the Goomba, added points to this as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
You need to work on your body part drawings, they were pretty bad. Also, this was really hard to follow, I had no idea what was going on in this movie for the most part, and then the ending was completely weird.

[Behold The FUTURE]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another good Lemon Demon music video! The song you picked was very unique. This was the first time I've heard it, and it was quite interesting. You had some good animations in this, most of the time following the song fairly well. I liked your drawings as well, they were well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought that towards the end this movie got weaker. It wasn't nearly as good at the end in the beginning. It just looks like you got tired of doing this movie and slacked a little bit ;)

niklasva responds:

I will think about that in my next movie. ;)