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^^Good Points^^
The music was pretty good, I liked it. Also, I can see the humor and concept you were trying to get across here, but not too funny.
^^Needs Improving^^
I think you are really selling NG quite short. NG has a ton of great content on here, and to be quite honest, it is submissions like this that really make NG a worse place to make people think so lowly of NG. You should really try to help if you think it is a problem!