FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fright Night]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very nice movie you have here. I can't say I was scared by it, but I've never been scared by a Flash movie, but this one still has the same effects. You had a lot of freaky sound effects added to this to give it that creepy feel to it. The animations were well done, very realistic and intense. I can sense the characters' fear.

^^Needs Improving^^
A very large file size that I feel wasn't really necessary for this movie. You could have definitely reduced it by optimizing sound.

[CC loves you Tom]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, well the CC loves Tom I guess. I thought this was going to be something disrespectful, but you surprised me. The drawings and animations were all pretty good. Your clock drawings were very detailed, and I loved how Tom raved in his tank, and Flashdrive's moves were pretty sweet as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
That rave scene definitely needed some more clocks to be dancing around in it. A tribute to Tom deserves more clocks.

[Black vs white 2 Finished]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music really helped to make this movie more interesting and more intense. But of course the animations really made the movie. The shaking camera, changing background, and wonderful FBF animation add up to a great stick violence movie. Very interesting attacks too, some of them were pretty creative.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could perhaps use some more V-cam effects, like zooming in and such and maybe some slow motion effects to bring out some of the harder hits.

[¡When Worlds Collide!]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very good effort in this movie. The graphics were the best part about this movie. You shaded everything very consistently and very accurately. The drawings were very cool and imaginative, as was the storyline. You had a funny storyline, especially towards the end.

^^Needs Improving^^
I definitely thought this would feature the Powerman 5000 song with the same title as this movie >:(

EternalRabbit responds:

there will be a finale to this that will have that song! watch out for it!

[Pants Off Men]

K

^^Good Points^^
Probably the best movie I've reviewed so far today, which is about 20 :(. Anyway, the movie was awesome. The song was very funny, especially during the chorus, with the gay colored houses and pants off men. The drawings were very funny looking, like the people and the robot. Also, I liked how you synced this to the music fairly well, with quite a few things going on in the backgrounds.

^^Needs Improving^^
A great submission, can't think of much right now.

0019 responds:

Yay thanks I appreciate it, 959!

[420 Now]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good song for the movie you made. The drug filled lyrics fit the movie well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm really not on board with this whole drug scene, and think it's rather immature, but anyway the movie itself isn't quality even from a non-objective point of view. You have very few animations, basically just a few boring things flying through the air while I watch some Chinese guy get high. I think if you did drugs you could come up with something more interesting than this.

[Keep on Running]

K

^^Good Points^^
Much better FBF than most people can do. You animated very well, the three dimensional aspects to this was very cool, and very realistic. I liked the happy music, and the scenes were very well drawn. A neat little movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I notice you didn't really do any shading at all. Everything you drew was filled in with solid colors, no shading or gradients. It would look much better, especially with the three dimensions, if you had done this.

WAR-HEART responds:

thats some good advice thanks
shading coming up

[Smoke - The City Menace]

K

^^Good Points^^
The movie displays a good moral, that smoking is bad, which I agree on. Anyway, I like how you had a lot going on in this movie aside from the main character, which was neat. Seems like a regular day when you do that. The animations were pretty cool, definitely the best part of this graphically.

^^Needs Improving^^
First thing I noticed was the short loop you had. It played the whole time which was annoying, and even worse, it was pretty low quality. Also, the storyline just seems to drag on too long. You need to get to the point much quicker. I'll admit I didn't watch the whole thing because I was pretty bored.

n00b-l0s3r responds:

Thank ye. Your criticism will be taken into much consideration. And I didn't know such simple animation would give this so much bonuses XD

It's OK if you didn't watch it all. At least you watched it :D