FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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^^Good Points^^
An interesting SBC themed animation here. I thought it was kind of cool how you had a lot going on in this movie, especially with the backgrounds and stuff. It was almost trippy to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing much as far as animating a story goes. It seems like just random stuff to me looped over an over again. I don't really like it for entertainment value.

[The Mighty Gnome Dance]

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^^Good Points^^
That was interesting as far as gnome dances go. I'd say I had to like the moves of the plump woman gnome though. The music was a good dancing tune for the gnomes as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...seems more like a bunch of headbobbing to me. You could have done a little more with the dancing to make this more interesting. Also, wasn't very long.

[Penguin Gots A Gun]

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^^Good Points^^
Actually a pretty interesting movie. I liked the song you had playing during this, went with the penguin's attitude I guess. Also, the ending was pretty funny. Wasn't expecting the penguin to die from a massive recoil of the gun.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations were a little crude. You didn't animated much besides things on a large scale. Could use some smaller stuff just for fun. Also, the beginning was completely silent. It just sounded awkward.

[Milano Toons 029]

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^^Good Points^^
This collab was actually pretty cool. The intro movie and the menu were both well done and made a good impression. Each part of the collab itself was pretty funny, my favorite had to be the one with the cat though.

^^Needs Improving^^
Very cool job overall, I can't think of anything specific.

[(Old) Pawn of the Dead]

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^^Good Points^^
I'm a little disappointed that this movie isn't a lot more popular than it seems to be. Looks like its life has been cut short! The art was brilliant. The shading looks easy to do, but it still looks very unique and very colorful. Loved the humor throughout. The voice acting was very believable and very professional. This movie even had the needed benny hill chase scene. Great job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Those guys have really ugly heads.

[Mr. Bitch]

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^^Good Points^^
I give you points for effort. Looks like you gave it a good shot. The events were kind of funny. Liked the crotch punching and lightsaber action.

^^Needs improving^^
Drawings could really use a lot of improving. Mostly needs better coloring and some shading perhaps. Also, something in the background and more camera movement would do wonders.