FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DBZ (In a banana peel)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hah, I can't believe this didn't get a higher score, as I thought it was hilarious when I first watched it. The exaggerated yelling and cursing was hilarious, and I loved how the energy ball moved so slowly. It was the perfect satire in my opinion. Great voice acting and funny drawings!

^^Needs Improving^^
The reason the score is low is probably the graphics, so may want to think about that in the future.

[Sonic's Day Out]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, kind of random but it gave me a bit of a chuckle.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sprites weren't very well defined. It doesn't look bad, but you could have made them clearer if you wanted to. The movie was really short and didn't make any sense at all, but it's ok.

[lotr : Second Breakfest]

K

^^Good Points^^
Yeah, a pretty good movie in my opinion. Arranging the sound clips was done well, and I like how you made the characters. The faces were drawn perfectly for what they were saying. Funny ending as well, I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall the art could use a little bit of improvement. You didn't do any shading, and the animation looked a little bit elementary. Work on making that part of this a little more realistic.

Griffinflash responds:

Thank you, I'll consider doing that, i knew that I had forgotten to do something. Btw, I'm not an artist.

[The Boy goes to Store]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was mildly funny. The drawings kind of remind me of the pube muppet films, which I like. Also, the ending was kind of funny when you say he "bot a food".

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations were much to look at. Very primitive animations and drawings. The movie was also very short and didn't have much of a storyline. Nothing unexpected happened in this movie.

[Proxist Is Sexxxxy!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, some of the images were kind of funny in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not a very cool movie here. It wasn't very funny, especially today when no one knows who that is. The images were poor quality and poorly animated. Didn't really like the music, and overall this was just boring.

[FINAL EPIC]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, this was mildly funny as a satire of an RPG type battle, but it was mostly just bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were terrible. The drawings were very simplistic and you used a lot of ugly gradients to color stuff. The animations were not smooth at all, in fact, looked more like a slide show. The storyline was lame and there was lacking sound effects.

[Mac VS PC]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good idea to have a mac commercial parody, as it seems you are on the microsoft side, which I like. I think you should continue this series with some better episodes in the future.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was kind of disappointing. You said it was short, but this was just ridiculous. There was only one joke in the entire episode, and it wasn't even that funny.

SalmonBerryClock responds:

I'm not on the microsoft side. I have a Mac and I plan on keeping it that way. Microsoft it stupid.
And no, I'm not making any more episodes.

[Honey Roasted Peanuts]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawing was actually pretty funny looking, which is where most of the points in this review come from!

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall, this was just disappointing! The drawing of the peanut wasn't even that good, and it was animated even worse. The loop was very short which I didn't like either. I wish you would have animated this a little bit fuller.

[The P.I.:REDUX]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline in this movie was definitely the best part. It was pretty cool to go through the entire thing, as the storyline had a few twists and overall a realistic feel to it. Some good drawings too, I liked this movie/game.

^^Needs Improving^^
It really needs some sound. Without coloring and sound, this is really bland and its just a major turnoff not to have either of these things. They probably hurt your score a lot.