FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CC- Gone Fishing]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty good, especially for your first CC related movie. The graphics were very smooth, cool drawings of your characters and environments. The movie was nice and short, but still had quite a bit of humor in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess you could have used some vcam effects to zoom in a little bit or something, just to movie things around and make it more interesting.

Wikk responds:

I was going to use a vcam but i didnt know how to use it and make the subtitles stay on screen all the time, oh well thanks for the review!

[BlobCombat.V-tSoB]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't too bad. The animations are getting better each time you make one of these. The storyline was pretty interesting, I liked watching this. Also, good sound effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
I notice that the text goes by too fast some times, and I'm afraid that I may have missed a bit of the storyline because of this.

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[Beautiful Pico Day]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely good graphics. I liked the layering in this movie, it created a very realistic effect with the animations. Cool music too. As far as loops go, this wasn't so bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's not even pico day. In fact, there is a few months until that day, so this was just a little bit random. Also, just a loop, which I don't really like.

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ShortMonkey responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm going to make a better one for Pico day. :)

[Legend of Zelda : HTW]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a very cool movie that you made. It's definitely a new concept instead of the average sprite movie. The graphics were nice, cool sprite manipulation and animation too. The music and sound effects were good, as they changed throughout the movie. Looks like it will be a good series if you continue making it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The framerate looked a little bit slow to me, and you should definitely up it to at least 20 next time.

Slock responds:

Thank you for taking the time to review ! I made this a while ago and know I'm done with sprites lol. I am very busy studying but I'm working on something else, and so far I think its better than this one ! When I get some time I will finish it...well thanks again, I worked really hard on that one, thats about a month of work :P

[Dark Angel the protector.]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty cool. The graphics were very well done. The drawings were very cartoon like and had good shading and prespective. The camera angles changed a lot, nice job there. Overall, a cool action movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely needs some sound effects to go along with it, just the music isn't quite good enough as far as sound goes.

[Ackbar: Lessons Learned]

K

^^Good Points^^
Cool to see a fan made ackbar movie here on NG. The graphics weren't bad, though I guess you really didn't make them. Some of the sound clips were pretty cool as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit short for my tastes. Seems like you kind of rushed it. Work on a little bit better of a storyline rather than just having a bunch of sound clips.

ZeldaFreakNeo responds:

thanks! Not very many people actually give out tips. Im working on a longer fan one.