FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark Angel the protector.]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty cool. The graphics were very well done. The drawings were very cartoon like and had good shading and prespective. The camera angles changed a lot, nice job there. Overall, a cool action movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely needs some sound effects to go along with it, just the music isn't quite good enough as far as sound goes.

[Ackbar: Lessons Learned]

K

^^Good Points^^
Cool to see a fan made ackbar movie here on NG. The graphics weren't bad, though I guess you really didn't make them. Some of the sound clips were pretty cool as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit short for my tastes. Seems like you kind of rushed it. Work on a little bit better of a storyline rather than just having a bunch of sound clips.

ZeldaFreakNeo responds:

thanks! Not very many people actually give out tips. Im working on a longer fan one.

[GG - Glocks at the Mall 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another episode of this series. This time meeting another glock, slurpee I believe. Again, good drawings and animations of your characters and nice voice overs.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm a little disappointing that the first episode doesn't have really anything to do with this one. I thought perhaps it would be a continuations with rofl, but looks like it will be just them meeting new characters throughout.

SmirnoffGlock responds:

k.

[GG - Glocks at the Mall]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, the drawings of the characters weren't too bad. Nice to see an appearance by Roflmuffin. Good use of speakonia as well. I think this is good enough for me to be interested in watching the next episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit short for my tastes. It would have been better if you had put a little more storyline and bulk into this just to make it more interesting.

[GG - Beautiful Day]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hmm, nice to see that the GG is back in action. I liked the graphics in this. Cool drawings and neat animation. The ending had its humor too people, come on now.

^^Needs Improving^^
It was a really long loop, which was annoying. Would have been cool if you had added a little more than a tween of a movie clip.

AlbinoGlock responds:

nop

[Heist]

K

^^Good Points^^
Pretty cool movie. You got creative with the sound effects, which was neat. The graphics were very clean, looked very professional. Animations were also good, smooth as well. The ending was pretty funny as well. I wasn't expecting an elephant to be in his arms.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just felt a little bit too unoriginal in the beginning. Reminded me too much of an old cartoon you would watch on TV.

[(Pablo)Detective-Tortilla]

K

^^Good Points^^
Yeah, looks like a pretty good movie you've got going on here. The drawings were cool. Nice human drawings and lots of details in the backgrounds and stuff. I like how you animated to the clip that you had, which followed it very well. Funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's kind of weird how you mixed anime style characters and regular characters. Just looked kind of strange.

Keveta2 responds:

Strange indeed lol, I can only draw anime chicks :< or else they end up even weirder :x

[Previously on House]

K

^^Good Points^^
Yeah, this pretty much sums up the show from my point of view. Some angry doctor always doing things that the nurses don't think is right. Very funny how you portrayed the characters, and there were hyperboles throughout, which made this pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Voices were a little low. They were a bit hard to hear at first in this movie. Try making them clearer next time.

Sticky responds:

I made the voices as clear as I could...

The problem was the music tends to muffle the voices a bit but I didn't want the music too low so I did what I thought was best...

anyway, thanks

[SMB3 Short: Brothers!]

K

^^Good Points^^
The sound effects were pretty good. Some humor in this as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't see why you insist on having no music. Some subtle background music always makes a movie more inviting to watch. None of the ideas in this movie were really all that original, in fact the movie was kind of boring. With no dazzling graphics, this was just run of the mill.

[Baby its fact]

K

^^Good Points^^
Cute video for your girlfriend. The graphics were pretty cool, liked the sketchy style you used. There was a good bit of humor in this movie as well, as your characters had lots of good facial expression throughout and some random stuff happened.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could use a little more in sound besides just the music.