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[Roger & Percy At The Park]

K

^^Good Points^^
The way you had the narrator in this movie was kind of interesting. Not sure if I liked it or not, but it was kind of unique. The movie was also definitely different from most stuff. Interesting...

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit tasteless I think. Didn't really like the whole bloody scene. Anyway, there wasn't a whole lot of animation in this, which didn't help out the situation any more.

[Animator Vs Zombies]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a decent submission. It was pretty cool how you drew all of the scenery in this as the movie progressed. There was a lot going on and lots of dead zombies. The sound effects weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings weren't too good, and neither were the animations. The animations weren't very detailed, basically just tweens. Also, looks like you could work on the backgrounds a lot, seeing as how you seemed to erase a bit towards the right as the movie went on. Perhaps a layering issue?

[AA- Pineapple Atom Collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good music throughout to be honest. Liked that part of it. The graphics weren't too bad in this either.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, not a very good show for your first collab. To be honest the different parts of this weren't too interesting. They were all just loops, and none of them were too creative or entertaining. I noticed that Soviet's part doesn't have a menu button, which is pretty annoying.

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[DeathArena]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part was definitely the music. You had a lot of cool songs in this movie and changed them often, which made things less boring. The movie wasn't too bad, I like the concept of it at least.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how quickly this moves. Also, it would be better if everyone didn't die within five seconds, that was kind of lame. Work on slowing things down, and eventually doing some more animating, perhaps with a little more than just circles.

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HomerDough responds:

thnx

[Korean Love Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
This had a lot of cool characteristics. The song was pretty unique, which I liked. The graphics were pretty good too. You had great perspective, and while moving the camera you showed realistic background movement. Cool characters as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I just didn't feel this going well with the music. The characters didn't really look like they were saying lines from the song, and I just didn't get that feel for some reason. Also, the drawings were very inconsistent. Sometimes the backgrounds were beautiful and had lots of detail, and other times, they looked very bland and unprofessional.

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Kenzu responds:

I'm happy you like my work.

Maybe you haven't thought about that, but it didn't look like the characters were saying lines from the song, because they WERE NOT saying lines from the song, but lines to the text I have given them. That's all

[Sherbert the Cat 3-2]

K

^^Good Points^^
This series seems to be getting slightly better with each episode. This episode had the best graphics so far. There were some good effects, and the camera was always changing. The storyline was pretty creative, I liked what you did in this episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
Same as last time, pretty much the only sound in this is the music. There is a lot going on with this movie but no sound effects to back things up.

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