FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shiny Happy Clocks]

K

^^Good Points^^
A cool little clock style music video for a good song. You adapted the lyrics into your animation a bit, which was cool, and overall the movie had a cool feel to it. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess the graphics could use the most improving in this movie. There wasn't a whole lot of animation, and mostly just tweens. But still it's pretty good for the time you made it.

[Wade & Tom Forced Ceonsor]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess that some of the images were kind of funny, but most of them went by too fast to appreciate.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, images go really fast, hard to actually see most of them. Most of what I can see though, I can say they weren't really funny at all and didn't entertain me. Plus a bunch of images put to such an annoying sound clip, you are just asking for trouble.

[Hot Love....BONG!!!!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the song was good (though the quality was terrible), I think it fit well in this movie. Also kind of funny how you described a love scene between the two items.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, terrible sound quality. Also, the movie just isn't presented very well. All of the text looks really crappy, and the graphics aren't that great either. The whole storyline was kind of stupid.

[Fat Head Beat Down]

K

^^Good Points^^
Pretty much the only redeeming quality of this movie was the graphics. The background was drawn fairly well, with some good use of gradients, and the character faces were animated well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie doesn't really have anything to it. You don't even animate the part where the guy gets hit, and honestly I think that would have made the movie slightly better.

[The Jonfather]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a decent movie. I thought the voice acting in the beginning was really well done, and then the bathroom scene was pretty funny as well. I thought this was a satisfying movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could use the most improving. The drawings weren't bad, but your animations were just very elementary and looked very unrealistic. Also, the sound clip quality in the bathroom scene was not very good.

[Infantry:The Awakening v2]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was really quite interesting. It was mostly interesting because it was unique, takes an interesting look at online gaming and the people who play it. Thought that the storyline was pretty creative, good job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, could have a little bit of animation more. There wasn't a whole lot during some scenes.

[POGOPOGOPOGOPOGO]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very interesting animutation movie. The music is decent for this type of music, and a good song overall. There was a lot going on in here, and the animations in this really captured the intensity of the song.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have cleaned this up a little bit with the images you got from around the web, some were pretty low quality. It would also be nice if the screen was a little bigger.

[CCHL: ClockCrew Half-Life]

K

^^Good Points^^
There were some funny parts in this movie, mostly when one of the characters said something completely random. Storyline was decent.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't very nice to look at. I don't like the screenshot backgrounds you had, would have been better if you drew them out. Also, not much animation in each scene, pretty much just the speech indicator. Got boring because of these two things.

[A Milky short #2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Yes, this is probably a lot better than the first. The storyline is actually there in this one. The sound effects were very realistic for the beach scene, and it was kind of cool how this one ended.

^^Needs Improving^^
Still, a very short short, and perhaps too short. Also, you didn't draw milk very good this time. Looks like you actually just traced bitmap on a google image or something. Not a good idea.

[A Milky short #1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Looks like you have a good amount of skill in your FBF animations. I liked the animation in this, it looked pretty smooth to me. Also, some good sound effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
I know it's supposed to be a short, but they should really not be this short and have this little storyline. This looks more like just a test than a short movie.