FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Starwars]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty high quality submission here. The animations, though with stick figures were kind of life-like and the lighting effects with the saber collisions were good. I liked the sound effects and music in here too. The fights got better as they went on too. Neat job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, not too keen on the whole stick figure thing with star wars, also seems like you strayed from a traditional SW fight, by adding a lot of elements that those characters cannot do.

[Eres Veneno ++]

K

^^Good Points^^
Great art in this one. The drawings were very good, and especially the animations were great. Very life-like human animations and good camera angle changes and effects. The storyline was kind of cute too, I liked that.

^^Needs Improving^^
There is no shading, and honestly the drawings seem like they could be better. Also, I don't like how this is just set to music and nothing else. Could have a much better storyline with more sound.

[Fire: Episode 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Pretty much the same stuff as the last episode. Good speakonia tones used, and a decent storyline if you actually watch the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics did not improve at all, so they still need to. More detail in the drawings, especially backgrounds, and absolutely no animations in this, so add that too. Could move a little faster if you didn't have so many random intermissions.

[Fire: Episode 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The speakonia was pretty good in this. I liked the different tones for each character, and some funny stuff was said throughout this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really boring. There was almost no animation at all. You just showed a picture of the character that was talking. The backgrounds and characters were drawn pretty poorly, and honestly it was too long for the graphics and storyline. Got boring quickly.

[Fourth of July Collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
This collab actually wasn't that bad at all. I liked the music, especially the Sonic boss theme and whatever twostars was, great song. Also, seeing fourstar play the violin was pretty funny, that had to be my favorite part.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing in this was really stunning graphically at all. They were all pretty much just quick little things that appear to be made very quickly.

[img timeline]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well you added some music to this, which definitely made it more annoying.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly, a terrible submission. The whole thing was made up of just extremely poorly cut images that were very low quality and edited only slightly in Flash, which actually made them look worse. The music was annoying, and I honestly didn't watch this for very long at all.

[PH33R PimpMasterKDOG]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess for a pheer movie this wasn't bad. The music was a decent choice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not really intimidated by this video, nor do I really pheer this guy. The movie was really short, only a few seconds long, and you didn't animate much at all. A rather bland submission.

[frogbag5000]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was kind of funny. I like how it is like a tv commercial in how gimmicky it is. I actually thought the different uses for the bag were the best part, and using the link cable was a pretty funny thing to say.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics aren't very good. Not much animation, and the color of the frog bag is always changing throughout this. Also, no music. Some voice overs would be great.