FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lovely bunch of coconuts]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well that was definitely an interesting movie. I liked how you had SBC as the sort of guide to the words. Also, the ending was probably the best part about this. Just funny to see Milk appearing differently on the screen every few seconds.

^^Needs Improving^^
The beginning was rather lacking. The movie didn't offer much as that part, as pretty much all that happened was Milk was dancing around. That part could be a lot better.

[Milk writes a poem]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty cool. I thought the poems, especially the second one were funny. Heh, secks for ice cream. Great stuff. Also, the ending was good, very cool animating and drawing in that part of the movie. Good graphics throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...A little bit short I guess, could have been a bit longer.

[Plum Squad episodes 1-8]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was cool as all the episodes were really short, and put together they actually made a pretty enjoyable movie to watch. I thought some of these were kind of funny, and the speakonia was great too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Would have been a lot better if you had maybe done some episodes in a different scene or something. This was just kind of boring with the same scene and the same violence in a lot of the episodes.

[Starwars]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty high quality submission here. The animations, though with stick figures were kind of life-like and the lighting effects with the saber collisions were good. I liked the sound effects and music in here too. The fights got better as they went on too. Neat job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, not too keen on the whole stick figure thing with star wars, also seems like you strayed from a traditional SW fight, by adding a lot of elements that those characters cannot do.

[Eres Veneno ++]

K

^^Good Points^^
Great art in this one. The drawings were very good, and especially the animations were great. Very life-like human animations and good camera angle changes and effects. The storyline was kind of cute too, I liked that.

^^Needs Improving^^
There is no shading, and honestly the drawings seem like they could be better. Also, I don't like how this is just set to music and nothing else. Could have a much better storyline with more sound.

[Superstition]

K

^^Good Points^^
A Clock Crew music video, pretty cool. Neat how you synced the animations with the music somewhat.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not much really happens throughout the movie that doesn't happen in the first 20 seconds. It got boring after a while. Could have had some more characters for different sounds, like the drums could have been represented a little more than just in the beginning.

[Fire: Episode 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Pretty much the same stuff as the last episode. Good speakonia tones used, and a decent storyline if you actually watch the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics did not improve at all, so they still need to. More detail in the drawings, especially backgrounds, and absolutely no animations in this, so add that too. Could move a little faster if you didn't have so many random intermissions.

[Fire: Episode 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The speakonia was pretty good in this. I liked the different tones for each character, and some funny stuff was said throughout this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really boring. There was almost no animation at all. You just showed a picture of the character that was talking. The backgrounds and characters were drawn pretty poorly, and honestly it was too long for the graphics and storyline. Got boring quickly.

[Fourth of July Collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
This collab actually wasn't that bad at all. I liked the music, especially the Sonic boss theme and whatever twostars was, great song. Also, seeing fourstar play the violin was pretty funny, that had to be my favorite part.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing in this was really stunning graphically at all. They were all pretty much just quick little things that appear to be made very quickly.

[img timeline]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well you added some music to this, which definitely made it more annoying.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly, a terrible submission. The whole thing was made up of just extremely poorly cut images that were very low quality and edited only slightly in Flash, which actually made them look worse. The music was annoying, and I honestly didn't watch this for very long at all.