FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Negro On A Canoe]

K

^^Good Points^^
Actually a pretty good submission, which I was surprised by. I thought it was funny how the viewer kind of plays the roll as the goat, which was pretty random. I guess this whole movie was random, as nothing bananaclock said really made any sense at all.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could have used a bit more animation, since you really only animated a few pieces of this.

[not stick SKATER movie]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics are pretty good. Most skate movies are made with stick figures, but this is probably the best movie I've seen that uses actual character designs. Good animations too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie is really short. You should have definitely made this longer, or at least added some color or something. Also, sometimes the sound effects don't match up with the animations.

[Break it Down]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, that was cool. The graphics is definitely the strongest part of this movie. The drawings were cool, and they had lots of shading and good definition. Cool how you synced to the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a little bit more from this. You basically introduced all of the characters but then nothing happened. You ended this too quickly.

[Britain vs America]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty nice quality fight scene. The animations were pretty smooth, some cool fighting techniques in here as well. It was also funny how France joined in the brawl. Cool music as well. Matrix music is always great for fight scenes.

^^Needs Improving^^
I forgot which one was America and which was Britain, so perhaps some kind of better depiction of which is which in the coloring.

[Riverdance with BushBlair]

K

^^Good Points^^
I wasn't expecting much from this, but it was actually pretty funny to watch. The animations were good, looked like a fine dance, but I really liked all of the people that made appearances, like Hitler and Darth Vader. Truly a party!

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...graphics is definitely the weak section in this review, so try to work on that part a bit.

[DFC Counter-strike]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was a little iffy about you using the CS screenshots, but you actually integrated the characters into the scenes very well. The storyline was cool, and I thought there was some humor in this. Pretty cool ending as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't know why you suddenly decided not to use Speakonia at the end of this.

[Skate Bros Ride On 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the sound in this movie, it definitely goes good with the skating theme. The animations were definitely better than I thought they were going to be, and pretty cool tricks.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess you could have done some more animation in the body to make his movements look a little more realistic. Perhaps you could have some sound effects too. Also, would have been cool if you had some falling scenes, where tricks weren't landed :)

[SOAD - Fuck The System]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was cool how you at least synced up the animations with the music most of the time, especially during the chorus parts.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings were really ugly. You used really fat lines to draw everything and also there is no coloring, which makes it look really unprofessional. I also say that you should use more layering, as you can see stuff being left around on the screen from other animations and it was hard to erase.

[Vladmir Putin Attacks]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually found this to be somewhat entertaining. The long drawn out scene in the beginning was funny with the constant screaming and thriller music. Then the actual attack scene was just funny because of how silly it was.

^^Needs Improving^^
It was just completely unnecessary how that guy just suddenly grabbed a skateboard. It just prolonged the movie a bit too much.

[ANGERY FASUS]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I liked the music. I think it fit the angry theme of this movie quite well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Can't say there was much quality in this work. You basically just put a bunch of Angry faces on to random images. It would have been a lot better with some better quality pictures, and maybe animated a little more interestingly. Also, there was gross misspelling throughout this.