FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Santa's Origin]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the dress up game on the menu, it killed some time while I was bored. The movie itself has a pretty original storyline. You explained quite a few things about Santa and the whole Christmas thing. There was a lot of pretty decent graphics in here and the animations weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was really distracted and kind of bored during the movie, which is probably due to the lack of sound effects and what not in this. You need to add voice overs or something to break the music.

[Real Life Ghost Footage]

K

^^Good Points^^
The video and audio quality were pretty high in this, much better than most videos imported into Flash. I think I may have seen the ghost but I'm not really sure...

^^Needs Improving^^
It's pretty obvious that you edited the clip a little bit. I can see the freezing mentioned in the previous review. Besides that, I'm not sure that I even saw the ghost. Was it just a shadowy looking thing? That's all I saw, and that was the third time I watched it.

[I like monster drinks]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics had to be the best part of this, unfortunately. The drawings were half decent. Animations were slightly better than that.

^^Needs Improving^^
First the sound is an atrocity. If you are going to make things loud, that is fine, but you have to make up for the sound clip in quality. This just sounded like noise to me. The storyline was kind of lame, not something I would have made a movie about, and the events that took place were not very exciting at all.

[Grey celebrates(?) cday]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawing wasn't bad, and also the music was good quality and a decent song as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a lack of effort. Why the hell was he crying? People want to watch flash videos not to be confused, but to get into a storyline of a short movie. This had no storyline, no explanation and really nothing worthwhile to watch in it. You need to add some kind of storyline to this.

[Bbqbeef Goes to War]

K

^^Good Points^^
A fun idea for a movie, having BBQ go to war. Funny antics followed him as always in his movies. It was pretty funny how he and Ham just talked while gray did all of the work in this movie. Good idea to use voice overs from a game too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Same with your last BBQ movie, I really felt that something else could have happened. It's a good idea for a movie, and pretty funny, but so much more could have happened.

[Bbqbeef Goes Deaf]

K

^^Good Points^^
Interesting storyline. It gave you a lot of options of what to make out of the storyline. The graphics were the best part of this. I liked the text box you chose, and the drawings were pretty fair. Not bad music either.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was quite disappointed with this movie. BBQBeef going deaf has to be one of the better ideas for a movie that I've heard of, yet you did nothing with it. Your character came up to his window, shouted some mean things at him then left. I was totally surprised that that was the end, and very disappointed at the same time.

[Can't touch this!]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty funny clips from that TV show, and it fit well with a CC movie. You animated fairly well, and the animations went along with the song and were synced well. My favorite part had to be when he did the bump. Good drawings, lots of characters, overall good job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you could have done some more animation to fit this. In the beginning and end I was a little disappointed in the lack of things happening in this. You didn't show anyone who "could touch me" and in the beginning he was basically just moving around for ten seconds.

[CC - Group Photo]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty good movie for Clock Day. An original storyline of taking the picture, and ki10's appearance was kind of surprising. I really liked the speakonia you used, and the cameraman's voice was really funny at the end. A good picture of the members of the CC.

^^Needs Improving^^
Drawings could use some refining. I like that you used original drawings, but the outlines could be a little thinner and a little cleaner. Thick outlines look very crude.

[cashew clock]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was good of course, but you didn't make it, but good choice anyway.

^^Needs Improving^^
Oh, where to start. I had no idea what the heck was going on in this movie. The very bad graphics made this hard to understand and very hard to follow. You didn't even trace the pictures at all to make them blend in a little more. I think it's pretty obvious that you had no idea what you were doing with this program when you made this. It was a great travesty.

[WOS - Tag]

K

^^Good Points^^
An interesting idea for a collab. The music was good in all three parts, and so were the graphics. I thought that Arskagarf's part was the best for having the most content in it and the most storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
An interesting idea, but not very good in practice. There was no relation between parts in this, and it was obvious they were all very quickly done. I think the WOS has set a certain standard for their collabs, but this is far below the line.

ZombiePanda responds:

In the Flash Tag collabs, it was actually a guideline that you have anywhere between 12 hours and 24 hours to finish youre part, include it in the FLA and send it off to the next person, and you are not allowed to start on youre part prior to getting the FLA. We originally had more people involved in this collab, but a good half of the WOS was signed up for this collab, and nearly everyone dropped out of it except for us three.