FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ed the Unhappy Papaya Ep1]

Good start

^^Good Points^^
The theme music is pretty catchy, which is why I originally voted to pass this through the portal. The storyline was a little cute.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are a little weird. The animations seemed to happen too slowly. The drawings were also a little lacking in detail. The voice overs were very low and were hard to hear. This was a little short too.

[World's strangest flash]

Absolutely.

^^Good Points^^
The only part I liked was the weird throw up monster or whatever the hell that thing was. It reminded me of Breath of Fire.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, your advice is right, one shouldn't make movies while they are high, because this was pretty lame. It didn't make a whole lot of sense, the sounds were just annoying, and most of it was just these flashy things flying around the screen. Not quite my style.

[Grandma Rockingchair]

Eww...

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were good and the way you blurred stuff to give a real life effect to this was pretty cool. The sound effect was also right on cue, and went along with the erie mood here.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is pretty weird and kind of scary looking. There really isn't a storyline and it's just a short loop, which isn't a whole lot. This is boring and kind of creepy.

[Alright, I lost my Pet!]

Pretty good

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part of this movie. The shading was done very professionally, and for the most part the drawings were good. The storyline was decent, and mildly funny. I liked the voice over as well, it sounded like Keanu Reeves.

^^Needs Improving^^
In one point the guy's arm was way too long, which bothered me. This also could have been a little longer.

[The Link Song.]

Musty

^^Good Points^^
I have to smile every time I hear that music in the background of the song. The animations for the most part, manily everything except the sprites, were done fairly well, and you show potential to create some good movies.

^^Needs Improving^^
It doesn't appear that you put a whole lot of effort into this movie. The drawings were really bland...I mean, come on, Link's body is a rectangle! There were no background drawings, a lot of the stuff didn't make sense, like the pointy spinning things in the middle. The song is used in lots of flash movies as well, so this is a little overdone.

[Silent Film: 3]

Very professional.

^^Good Points^^
I'm very impressed by how you made this look exactly like an old fashioned movie. I find it quite amazing. The old movie theme is done really well in this. The sounds, even though this is a silent movie, are very good, mostly the music since it fit the movie well. The storyline is full of humor and I enjoyed it.

^^Needs Improving^^
With the text, I would put a proceed button instead of it happening automatically.

[The BBB Collab]

Not horrible

^^Good Points^^
The graphics, though they weren't too professional, suited the music and I thought were pretty well done. The song itself is an interesting song to make a collab for, but overall, this was a good collab.

^^Needs Improving^^
Each part of this collab repeats a lot, which gets pretty boring. You should try to make a collab that doesn't repeat so much.

N00bNation responds:

I agree.

[Lock-wa teen hunger force]

More!

^^Good Points^^
If you make this into a series I promise to worship you! This was a very good lock movie and was very funny. Everything was drawn nicely, and animated well too. The characters are enjoyable and the voice overs are wonderful. This is a great movie and should be made into a series.

^^Needs Improving^^
Too short...Much too short.

[The Console Wars/Teaser]

Ok

^^Good Points^^
The graphics was this movie's best point. I liked the intro text and the clip of an Xbox 360 controller flying around in space, which is quite comical. The music is pretty crazy, and this is overall a pretty well done trailer.

^^Needs Improving^^
This idea has been done before, not sure if anything I've seen looks quite as good as this one, but it's not the most original idea.

TumbleWeedPro responds:

Heh heh, thanks for the review. Those were helpful tips. About the story though,I'm sure once you guys see the animation I'm sure you will think different. I'm doing my homework this time around and trust me Its going to be somthing you have never seen. Stay Tuned and thanks again. =3