FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Minataur]

An interesting movie

^^Good Points^^
The graphics are both good and bad in this. The drawings were pretty cool, looks like you didn't draw them in Flash though, looks like it was done with pencil and paper. The music was good and I always like fantasy storylines so I'm a little partial to this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations in this were the bad parts of the graphics. When the boy moves to the minotaur, no part of him moves, which just looks plain stupid. The storyline is a little lacking though. Nothing really happens and I have no idea why anything in this movie did happen. It's also spelled "minotaur" not "minataur" :D

[barbequebeefburger XVI]

Another...

^^Good Points^^
I like the graphical style in this. I like the staticy effect you added and how you made the corners look rounded, this is pretty cool. The sound was also nice, I can not get enough of that song. Plus the fact that you have Master Chief is pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
This series is becoming just a waste. It's exactly the same except for whoever is crappily moved around the screen. Not even the backgrounds change. This is just like spam. It's annoying and useless.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Spam?

OH NO

[Zoloft Returns]

What just happened?

^^Good Points^^
I'm impressed with the graphics. The white noise clip in the beginning is very cool looking...not sure how you would do that in flash, but it looks cool. The drawings were good and the spinny thing at the end was cool looking as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I watched this three times...does the guy say "would you like to pet my goat?" I'm not sure, but either way this is pretty pointless. It's too short, hard to hear and has no storyline whatsoever. I will say that with this return flash, I'm not happy to see you back.

[Ed the Unhappy Papaya Ep1]

Good start

^^Good Points^^
The theme music is pretty catchy, which is why I originally voted to pass this through the portal. The storyline was a little cute.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are a little weird. The animations seemed to happen too slowly. The drawings were also a little lacking in detail. The voice overs were very low and were hard to hear. This was a little short too.

[World's strangest flash]

Absolutely.

^^Good Points^^
The only part I liked was the weird throw up monster or whatever the hell that thing was. It reminded me of Breath of Fire.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, your advice is right, one shouldn't make movies while they are high, because this was pretty lame. It didn't make a whole lot of sense, the sounds were just annoying, and most of it was just these flashy things flying around the screen. Not quite my style.

[Grandma Rockingchair]

Eww...

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were good and the way you blurred stuff to give a real life effect to this was pretty cool. The sound effect was also right on cue, and went along with the erie mood here.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is pretty weird and kind of scary looking. There really isn't a storyline and it's just a short loop, which isn't a whole lot. This is boring and kind of creepy.

[Alright, I lost my Pet!]

Pretty good

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part of this movie. The shading was done very professionally, and for the most part the drawings were good. The storyline was decent, and mildly funny. I liked the voice over as well, it sounded like Keanu Reeves.

^^Needs Improving^^
In one point the guy's arm was way too long, which bothered me. This also could have been a little longer.

[The Link Song.]

Musty

^^Good Points^^
I have to smile every time I hear that music in the background of the song. The animations for the most part, manily everything except the sprites, were done fairly well, and you show potential to create some good movies.

^^Needs Improving^^
It doesn't appear that you put a whole lot of effort into this movie. The drawings were really bland...I mean, come on, Link's body is a rectangle! There were no background drawings, a lot of the stuff didn't make sense, like the pointy spinning things in the middle. The song is used in lots of flash movies as well, so this is a little overdone.

[Silent Film: 3]

Very professional.

^^Good Points^^
I'm very impressed by how you made this look exactly like an old fashioned movie. I find it quite amazing. The old movie theme is done really well in this. The sounds, even though this is a silent movie, are very good, mostly the music since it fit the movie well. The storyline is full of humor and I enjoyed it.

^^Needs Improving^^
With the text, I would put a proceed button instead of it happening automatically.