FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brother Battle]

Good effort

^^Good Points^^
It seems as though you put some effort into this. The sprites were well animated and the movements looked somewhat realistic, good for what can be done with Mario sprites. The sound effects were right on queue and sounded great. I liked the different music used as well. This flash just feels good to watch because there isn't any obvious errors.

^^Needs Improving^^
This idea is really overdone, I see stuff like this all the time in the portal. It wasn't too exciting and nothing really out of the ordinary happened. Next time make something with a more original storyline.

Guitardude responds:

Originality on NG?

well that's just crazy talk.

but seriously don't worry about it. i'll try...

[War.]

Good

^^Good Points^^
I liked the animation in this. The way the camera angles changed, the movement of items looked very realistic, like when the camera moved down the lines of troops. The fighting scenes were pretty cool and this was a very creative movie. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't like the whole, no coloring and pretty simplistic drawings thing. I think you could have done this a lot better if you had put some coloring and some more shape to it.

[2059 - Prt2]

This is just bad...

^^Good Points^^
As with the last episode, there really isn't a whole lot of positive things I can say. The futuristic idea is a start though.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storylines are pretty stupid and boring. I found myself bored to death through most of it, since very little animation goes on, and the storyline seems to just go along with the sound clips that you found, which aren't necessarily correlated with each other.

[2059 - Prt1]

Eh...

^^Good Points^^
I can't really say one thing about this that is really better than any other part. I guess the storyline isn't terrible.

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole stick figure thing looks really crappy, as do most of the drawings in this. The sound effects and music used in this were just plain annoying and this is the worst part about this movie. The sound effects weren't very well edited and most had some weird noise in the back. The music was a terrible choice and sounds just cut off out of no where which sounds really awkward.

[the YuYu]

Still going strong

Initially, I was a little disappointed in this. I watched this movie once and thought it was a little pointless. However, after reading the description to this, it shone new light on my opinion of this movie. I would have liked to see the sequel to littlefoot here, but I guess this is just as well. As always, the graphics are phenomenal, perhaps the best I have ever seen. The animations were very smooth and very clear, and I liked how at some parts they were synced well with the music. The music was an excellent tune and I'm glad you made a video out of it. Your work is truely amazing and you do a great service to NG every time you submit a movie, no different with this one.

[Adolf N' Woodrow 01]

I don't like it

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty funny idea...it never occured to me that these two could be compared in appearance and with a slight manipulation, look exactly the same. I always gotta laugh when I hear that song.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't really seem like it should be considered a movie. The bulk and point of this submission was just a picture with some background music. Meaning, not a whole lot of effort or talent put into this submission.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

They look the same because they are the exact same person.

Lack of effort? Hey now, I spent a whole 10 seconds making this Flash!

[Enter Carrot Clock]

Stale

^^Good Points^^
I really liked the way you did your voice overs for all of the characters instead of using Speakonia, the tone for SBC was very comical.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is a pretty prosaic movie. The graphics are limited to a few simple clock drawings...no backgrounds or any real drawing. The animations are sparing and lame and the storyline is very boring and not particularly funny.

[The Minataur]

An interesting movie

^^Good Points^^
The graphics are both good and bad in this. The drawings were pretty cool, looks like you didn't draw them in Flash though, looks like it was done with pencil and paper. The music was good and I always like fantasy storylines so I'm a little partial to this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations in this were the bad parts of the graphics. When the boy moves to the minotaur, no part of him moves, which just looks plain stupid. The storyline is a little lacking though. Nothing really happens and I have no idea why anything in this movie did happen. It's also spelled "minotaur" not "minataur" :D

[barbequebeefburger XVI]

Another...

^^Good Points^^
I like the graphical style in this. I like the staticy effect you added and how you made the corners look rounded, this is pretty cool. The sound was also nice, I can not get enough of that song. Plus the fact that you have Master Chief is pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
This series is becoming just a waste. It's exactly the same except for whoever is crappily moved around the screen. Not even the backgrounds change. This is just like spam. It's annoying and useless.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Spam?

OH NO

[Zoloft Returns]

What just happened?

^^Good Points^^
I'm impressed with the graphics. The white noise clip in the beginning is very cool looking...not sure how you would do that in flash, but it looks cool. The drawings were good and the spinny thing at the end was cool looking as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I watched this three times...does the guy say "would you like to pet my goat?" I'm not sure, but either way this is pretty pointless. It's too short, hard to hear and has no storyline whatsoever. I will say that with this return flash, I'm not happy to see you back.