FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[She's The One]

Yeah

^^Good Points^^
The scenes in the movie went along with what was happening in the song pretty well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the graphics weren't very good at all. The animations were too...solid. What I mean is that when people moved, very rarely did anything besides their whole being move, which looks pretty crappy. The music was a pretty dull, I thought it was going to be Smashing Pumpkins :(

As you said, this isn't a very good show of your talent.

Review Request Club.

JimmyDodger responds:

Thanks for the review first.

I tried to go with the song like you said I did. But I guess I went weak on the graphics. This was my first movie without using stick figures, so you cant really blame me. With the song, I just thought it would go with the style of the movie.

Thanks for the review.

[Brother Battle]

Good effort

^^Good Points^^
It seems as though you put some effort into this. The sprites were well animated and the movements looked somewhat realistic, good for what can be done with Mario sprites. The sound effects were right on queue and sounded great. I liked the different music used as well. This flash just feels good to watch because there isn't any obvious errors.

^^Needs Improving^^
This idea is really overdone, I see stuff like this all the time in the portal. It wasn't too exciting and nothing really out of the ordinary happened. Next time make something with a more original storyline.

Guitardude responds:

Originality on NG?

well that's just crazy talk.

but seriously don't worry about it. i'll try...

[War.]

Good

^^Good Points^^
I liked the animation in this. The way the camera angles changed, the movement of items looked very realistic, like when the camera moved down the lines of troops. The fighting scenes were pretty cool and this was a very creative movie. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't like the whole, no coloring and pretty simplistic drawings thing. I think you could have done this a lot better if you had put some coloring and some more shape to it.

[2059 - Prt2]

This is just bad...

^^Good Points^^
As with the last episode, there really isn't a whole lot of positive things I can say. The futuristic idea is a start though.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storylines are pretty stupid and boring. I found myself bored to death through most of it, since very little animation goes on, and the storyline seems to just go along with the sound clips that you found, which aren't necessarily correlated with each other.

[2059 - Prt1]

Eh...

^^Good Points^^
I can't really say one thing about this that is really better than any other part. I guess the storyline isn't terrible.

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole stick figure thing looks really crappy, as do most of the drawings in this. The sound effects and music used in this were just plain annoying and this is the worst part about this movie. The sound effects weren't very well edited and most had some weird noise in the back. The music was a terrible choice and sounds just cut off out of no where which sounds really awkward.

[the YuYu]

Still going strong

Initially, I was a little disappointed in this. I watched this movie once and thought it was a little pointless. However, after reading the description to this, it shone new light on my opinion of this movie. I would have liked to see the sequel to littlefoot here, but I guess this is just as well. As always, the graphics are phenomenal, perhaps the best I have ever seen. The animations were very smooth and very clear, and I liked how at some parts they were synced well with the music. The music was an excellent tune and I'm glad you made a video out of it. Your work is truely amazing and you do a great service to NG every time you submit a movie, no different with this one.

[Adolf N' Woodrow 01]

I don't like it

^^Good Points^^
This is a pretty funny idea...it never occured to me that these two could be compared in appearance and with a slight manipulation, look exactly the same. I always gotta laugh when I hear that song.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't really seem like it should be considered a movie. The bulk and point of this submission was just a picture with some background music. Meaning, not a whole lot of effort or talent put into this submission.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

They look the same because they are the exact same person.

Lack of effort? Hey now, I spent a whole 10 seconds making this Flash!

[Enter Carrot Clock]

Stale

^^Good Points^^
I really liked the way you did your voice overs for all of the characters instead of using Speakonia, the tone for SBC was very comical.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is a pretty prosaic movie. The graphics are limited to a few simple clock drawings...no backgrounds or any real drawing. The animations are sparing and lame and the storyline is very boring and not particularly funny.