FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Under Judgement]

K

^^Good Points^^
A neat little movie that is very perceptive. Your perception of the portal is really quite interesting, I enjoyed watching this movie. The graphics were pretty cool, and I think the music went very well with the storyline. Good ideas and good overall for this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
What was up with the end of this? Everything was really low quality and all pixilated. It looked really odd.

[Play your Wii Safely]

K

^^Good Points^^
Obviously based on that pretty funny clip of the guy slamming his controller into the wall, but still not a bad idea for a movie. I thought the sound effects really helped to make up for the lax graphics, they were really defined and appropriate. Funny ending too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics really weren't that good. I felt that the uncolored shapes in this really hurt this. It looked very unprofessional, and to say the least, looked like the drawings were done by someone not so talented in Flash. Definitely could use graphical improving.

[Talking to a robot]

K

^^Good Points^^
The movie started out pretty good. It seemed pretty random, but it was alright. The animations were very good throughout this, and I liked the crazy personality that the animations gave to the main character. The voice overs were pretty decent too, and I liked the mix with speakonia.

^^Needs Improving^^
This just got too weird towards the end of it. What little storyline there was just started to go off into a contest of who was hotter, and other random stuff that made absolutely no sense. I like random stuff, but this just wasn't even that funny.

NightShadowTWO responds:

i understand. this flash was totally random coz nothing in the voice recording was planned. its more of an animation practice than a planned humourful flash movie

[time travel.]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked this movie because of the voice overs. They sounded very genuine and added a lot to the humor of this. Your drawings were good, and the animations were life-like. The storyline was pretty funny, and the ending frame was cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
You may want to consider drawings some kind of background for this. I felt that the plain white background makes it look like you didn't put much effort into this.

[Sprite Combat 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
This had decent sprite use. You had a lot of animated sprites and good backgrounds as well. I thought the storyline was half decent too. Not that original and kind of childish, but decent.

^^Needs Improving^^
The first thing I noticed was the choppy animations. You have a pretty low framerate, which is made quite obvious in the beginning. Also, all the scenes are very zoomed out, which they should have been a little more zoomed in. You should have put the text in boxes or something just because it looks better that way, and also, you should have used sound effects, there was nothing but that incredibly annoying music playing.

[Real Life Ghost Footage]

K

^^Good Points^^
The video and audio quality were pretty high in this, much better than most videos imported into Flash. I think I may have seen the ghost but I'm not really sure...

^^Needs Improving^^
It's pretty obvious that you edited the clip a little bit. I can see the freezing mentioned in the previous review. Besides that, I'm not sure that I even saw the ghost. Was it just a shadowy looking thing? That's all I saw, and that was the third time I watched it.

[I like monster drinks]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics had to be the best part of this, unfortunately. The drawings were half decent. Animations were slightly better than that.

^^Needs Improving^^
First the sound is an atrocity. If you are going to make things loud, that is fine, but you have to make up for the sound clip in quality. This just sounded like noise to me. The storyline was kind of lame, not something I would have made a movie about, and the events that took place were not very exciting at all.

[Bbqbeef Goes to War]

K

^^Good Points^^
A fun idea for a movie, having BBQ go to war. Funny antics followed him as always in his movies. It was pretty funny how he and Ham just talked while gray did all of the work in this movie. Good idea to use voice overs from a game too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Same with your last BBQ movie, I really felt that something else could have happened. It's a good idea for a movie, and pretty funny, but so much more could have happened.