FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Day of the Devil]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were very good, obviously the tablet payed off. You drawings were very good, and the animations were good as well, most of the time looking very three dimensional. The storyline was pretty comical, I really liked some of the stuff said in this and the sense of paranoia. The Spooky Castle scene was hilarious.

^^Needs Improving^^
Jon's voice overs were kind of low and a little hard to hear at times. Also, I was expecting this to have a little bit more to do with RS, yet the game was only mentioned once. I was a little disappointed by that.

[The Strange SMW 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Like the last episode, very good graphics. You zoomed in and out a lot, making this more interesting, and you also edited sprites by yourself, which was a good thing. Great musical choices too. Another strange, yet entertaining episode!

^^Needs Improving^^
It's a lot shorter compared to your last one, and I was expecting it to be a little bit longer. The blood you drew didn't look that good either. You didn't put texture into it, so it was obvious that it was drawn in.

[The Strange SMW]

K

^^Good Points^^
Strange is a good word to describe this! It was quite unique, and overall much better than most SMW movies. I liked how you weren't afraid to get close with the graphics and zoom into the scenes. You showed a lot of skill it camera usage and animation. The storyline was pretty funny, and the ending was cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
It appears that at some points the characters look like they are a little stretched out horizontally. Also, the black lines in the ground look crappy.

[Da RuneScape]

K

^^Good Points^^
You have a very different style of graphics compared to most RS themed movies, and I liked the change. The graphics were rather comical looking, and your animations were cool. The storyline was rather comical...the downfalls of Runescape. I had to laugh when the "7 hours later" screen came up, and the ending was very appropriate.

^^Needs Improving^^
A good movie, I cannot think of much to improve on.

[Pixles Ep#1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were very unique. I liked the low quality pixilated graphics, they are very unique and I actually like the style. It was kind of funny how everyone just kept saying "pixel", and the ending was unexpected and kind of funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately just an introduction to this pixelated world that you seem to have no continued recently. I really wish you would have continued the series as it seems to be pretty interesting. People probably won't like this because of the lack of interesting storyline though. I liked it.

[Pirate Banana]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well...I liked this submission. It was pretty quick yet was pretty entertaining. I loved the colorful scene, which was synced very well with the music. Cool colors and neat animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this doesn't really have much content in it. While it is kind of entertaining, it's just a very quick movie, and I can see a lot of people not liking the style of it.

[Asteroids Mishaps]

K

^^Good Points^^
As a parody this is pretty good. I didn't realize at first it was a parody, but after I did it was much funnier. I liked the "wrong game" thing, which was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
While this was funny, it still wasn't that entertaining. Half of the stuff you put into this movie was just stuff that happens regularly in the game and can't really be called a mishap.

[Sprite Combat 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
Seems things are slightly better in this movie. Your characters seem to be animated on slightly straiter lines. Also, you distinguished subtitles from characters, making it easy to understand. This one made more sense too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, low frame rate makes this to be a very choppy movie. Especially when you have a lot of distance between the character from frame to frame, this just starts to look rushed. Again, there were spelling mistakes throughout this and other grammatical errors that were kind of distracting. Also, the fight scenes aren't very well coreographed, and with no sound effects, once the music cuts off this becomes very boring.

[Sprite Combat 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I sense that you put a genuine effort into making this movie, and I guess you just aren't the best at making Flash movies. I do appreciate the effort though.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was a lot wrong with this. Like the last episode, the framerate was really slow which made the sprites look really choppy and overall the animations were very slow and delayed. You may also want to consider using spell checker or proofreading the text next time, as there were some usage errors and spelling errors. I found it hard at some times to determine who was saying what, there was no distinction between characters, which didn't help the already strange storyline, which just seems to jump to random events.