FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Trek Lovin]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was kind of entertaining. I thought the gargoyle with giant penis statue, and the sound clips went well together and created a very odd storyline. Good quality sound and what not.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like the bitmap of the Enterprise, it just looks out of place. The animations were pretty crude too. You could have animated some more on the smaller scale, like arms and legs rather than just entire bodies.

[Castle Commercial]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hah! I played the game Defend Your Castle before, but it never even crossed my mind that this would be an add for the game, but a wonderful one at that. The graphics were great, first off, better than most movies on NG. I loved how you started this out, I really had no idea what this was going to be about, and it was such a surprise to see what happened at the end, which was made very well, and very surprising. Great job on this!

^^Needs Improving^^
Really nothing that I can think of. This was a very delightful movie.

[AOL shark]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very odd storyline in this, but still very creative and very funny. I got that the guy wants to kill Jenny because she has inside jokes in her profile? That was kind of strange, but very funny. I liked the character you created, his voice overs were very good. The ending was hilarious too, I really laughed at this, "I will accept this citizenship award". Classic!

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could use some improving. The guy's face wasn't very detailed, he didn't have eye details, and the animations were even worse. Also, the voice overs got hard to hear towards the middle of this.

[Fadgrounds]

K

^^Good Points^^
A neat movie depicting the many odd fads on NG that have surfaced. I like how you had screenshots from each fad, and the music was very effective for the mood. I liked your drawings of the Flash and the backgrounds.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you could have added in some more fads into this, for more of a history of them, like BBQ and stuff like that.

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[Ultimate Prophet Movie]

K

^^Good Points^^
Half decent graphics. You had some good drawings in this, with good coloring, and mixed sprites with your own drawings.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really didn't get this. The movie made no sense, and it had no storyline at all that I could detect. You had a bunch of random events that seemed unrelated, and no music or sound effects to even spruce that up. Then when I got the the "Enter your spell" part, the button didn't seem to work.

[darkagespoof]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty good movie, I think. I have never played the game, but it sounds similar to Runescape, so I am familiar. The graphics were fair. You had your own drawings, and some good animations in this, and Steve Erkle making an appearance was funny. The facts part had to be my favorite of this movie though. Great music throughout this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some sound effects could be used I think. This was mostly just music, which didn't leave much space for sound effects. Try to lower the music and add some sound effects.

[Sorrow and Woe]

K

^^Good Points^^
I really liked the music. It definitely set a sorrowful mood depicted in the title. I just wish you had included audio credits so I could download the song, it was really nifty. I liked the winter scene pictures, and I thought most of the pictures were well chosen.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sadly, you really did minimal work for this movie. You just took a bunch of pictures from Google and put them into a flash movie. While the music was entrancing, this wasn't really a great movie, considering that you didn't even trace the images to make it at least seem like you made your own images.

[KKOOOLS]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was much better than I expected it would be. The graphics were pretty good. The drawings were very detailed and there was lots of shading. The voice overs were very good, they sounded just like they should have, very funny sounding. The storyline, though maybe a little crude, gave me a good laugh throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, from the intro I thought this was going to be completely crude. The beginning was pretty lame, with the gay sex and all, so not a very good beginning at all. I'm pretty sure people will find this offensive too.

[SoccerWorld]

K

^^Good Points^^
The sound was pretty good. You had three different songs in this, and it's always good to have some variety in music. The graphics were pretty good as well. You had some good animations in this movie, and good drawings as well. Very smooth.

^^Needs Improving^^
The white backgrounds were pretty odd looking. You should have definitely done some background drawings in this to make it look a little better. Also, I notice that this doesn't really have a lot of soccer in it. It's mostly just a star wars fight.

[It's A Beautiful Morning!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some of this was funny. That scary red zombie looking thing was pretty scary looking, but I like how you animated it. Also, the dancing that you animated in the beginning was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie wasn't really that good. You used a lot of bitmap images, which all looked pretty bad when zoomed in on. You should have definitely at least traced some of the bitmaps to make them a little more Flash friendly for this. For the most part pretty lame animations, which was just annoying, plus this was hard to understand.