FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL-Audition]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part about this movie. There was a lot of shading, also some good animations in this. Some of this was pretty funny. I liked the discussion with Digital lock, which had to be the best part about this. Nice length for what came out of this too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not really satisfied with where this started or ended. You didn't really have a storyline in this. What was she auditioning for?

danishcoffe responds:

Clocky was to the auditioning.

Thank you!

[Vagina Talk]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok idea for this movie. Not a terrible job of editing the mouths in.

^^Needs Improving^^
The fact that you just put some images into flash and then cut some mouths and stuck them on top does not show much Flash skill. Like all of your movies, these take very little effort of actual flash artwork. I'm really disappointed in this. The voice overs weren't very believable, and I just don't like the fact that none of this is drawn.

[The cat's pajamas ep. 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a terrible try at a first animutation movie. You had lots of flashing lights an lots of different images that were kind of funny. Quick, funny animations as well. Decent music too, though it could be better.

^^Needs Improving^^
I said the music was ok, but really it could have been a lot more exciting and have some lyrics, which all animutation movies should have in my opinion. Also, this could use some more image manipulation too, and animations other than rotations.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

do you review everything?

[Orange and the Locktaur]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely the best movie I have seen my you thus far. The storyline was very original, I liked the mythical setting you had here. The graphics were very cool. You had lots of detail in the background, and always had good camera angles and close-ups. I never got bored with this as there was humor throughout the movie. My favorite scenes had to be the intro to the last fight, the cardboard clockfriends, and also the introduction to the real clockfriends. Great stuff, awesome movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could always use improvement. They were very good, but I think it's what stopped you from winning a daily award over Strangeclock's movie yesterday.

[Drunken and Rena: TSM]

K

^^Good Points^^
A collab dedicated to thesoulman. An interesting idea, and it turned out pretty decent. I liked the first part best, since it had a storyline with him shooting blams at crappy movies, which is pretty funny. The second part was cool since it was synced with the music. Both parts had good drawings and good music.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a little bit short. Each part of this was short, and when combined they didn't make too much either. You definitely should have had some more people working on this one.

Little-Rena responds:

If it was more people, it would no longer be Drunken and Rena, lol P:
That's the main point to remember, lol.

Anyway, thanks for the review :)

[dont look!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Decent graphics. The people you drew were kind of realistic looking. Not a bad set of drawings here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Basically, I agree with the last reviewer completely. The Addams Family isn't based on humor of people exploding, it's more witty and comedical. Also, the music was pretty terrible. The original theme is much better than that remix you chose. Also, the text was always way cut off by the edges of the screen.

[Red Speech]

K

^^Good Points^^
An interesting movie. You definitely get a lot of hate mail, and reading it all was pretty interesting. There were some really funny ones in this, and I'm glad you decided to showcase this. The background graphics were pretty well made, and I also like the different pictures you had in here. The sound set a cool mood too.

^^Needs Improving^^
These are always funnier when you actually read them and then make comments on them. Just reading them myself doesn't give the same effect as some submissions like "My favorite reviews". You should watch that to see what I mean.

[Sherlock Holmes: Xmas 06']

K

^^Good Points^^
This was quite good. I'm actually surprised that it didn't win at least a daily fifth place award considering its score and how well-made it was. The best part was the humor. It was a funny movie throughout. I liked Sherlock's open homosexuality throughout. The best scene had to be the first, with him finding the man in the chimney. The voice overs were very good. Clear and defined, and fit the characters.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some people just look a little oddly drawn. The ghosts mostly look quite strange in their shape and details, unlike say Sherlock and Watson.

Review Request Club

Pigmash responds:

Hey thanks, and I like this review requests thing, its made me want to review things more often too. Yeah, none of my Sherlock Holmes flashs win awards despite good scores and very favorable reviews, annoyingly if Id finished this 2 days earlier I could have gotten daily feature. So thanks for the feedback, and the new characters from the next episode Im currently spending a lot of time drawing.