FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Adventure(s) of Snarf]

K

^^Good Points^^
When watched all the way through, this was a very good movie. After the crappy flash scene, this started to get much better and your humor became more creative and a little bit more mature. The graphics were pretty well done, good animations and good drawings too. A very funny storyline in this movie, I am liking these Dock people! Mission accomplished.

^^Needs Improving^^
First impressions are very important. This movie made a terrible one. For some reason in the beginning the animations were much cruder. Also, the bad flash scene was FAR too long. It shouldn't have been more than a few seconds long, as to not bore the audience.

xthesnarfx responds:

I have answers to your needs improving thing. Yeah I know that the finale countdown scene was waaaaay to long. At first I was planning on makeing a skip butten, but it wouldn't work for some odd ressone (im guessing because it was gana skip to something in the same scene). And the ressone that the begging part was really bad was because I started this when I was first getting into flash so I wasn't that good. I picked it back up about 3 weeks later at the line "Was that really nessisary?". I hope you have found your answers.

[ExciteDike]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't too bad. I don't see excitebike sprites on NG much, so this was neat. Good animations too with the sprites. Good quality music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting much more. You had a creative title for this, but it was just a guy who landed on his head then slid along. You definitely needed some sound effects in this, like a skidding effect towards the end would be obvious. You really need to have some more storyline in your next movie. This looks more like practice!

Nimii responds:

Well I appreciate the upbeat tone of your message. Thanks for taking the time to review the Flash. Yeah, I wouldn't say more practice... More time would be a little better. However, always improving. Always. The sound effects are probably going to be added to the final version which I will put on here as well. Adding the sound effects is the easy part anyway.

[LL-Audition]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part about this movie. There was a lot of shading, also some good animations in this. Some of this was pretty funny. I liked the discussion with Digital lock, which had to be the best part about this. Nice length for what came out of this too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not really satisfied with where this started or ended. You didn't really have a storyline in this. What was she auditioning for?

danishcoffe responds:

Clocky was to the auditioning.

Thank you!

[Vagina Talk]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok idea for this movie. Not a terrible job of editing the mouths in.

^^Needs Improving^^
The fact that you just put some images into flash and then cut some mouths and stuck them on top does not show much Flash skill. Like all of your movies, these take very little effort of actual flash artwork. I'm really disappointed in this. The voice overs weren't very believable, and I just don't like the fact that none of this is drawn.

[The cat's pajamas ep. 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a terrible try at a first animutation movie. You had lots of flashing lights an lots of different images that were kind of funny. Quick, funny animations as well. Decent music too, though it could be better.

^^Needs Improving^^
I said the music was ok, but really it could have been a lot more exciting and have some lyrics, which all animutation movies should have in my opinion. Also, this could use some more image manipulation too, and animations other than rotations.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

do you review everything?

[Marine Life]

K

^^Good Points^^
This turned out to be a pretty decent movie. The beginning is very interesting with the different types of marine life they are, that was a unique start to a movie and was quite interesting. By the end of this movie, I was pretty entertained. Pretty good graphics and coloring, and good music. Very calming.

^^Needs Improving^^
As interesting as this movie was, it was just boring as hell in the beginning. For about the first three minutes of this movie, everything moved incredibly slow, and nothing really developed in the storyline for quite a while. I was about to stop watching this.

[Orange and the Locktaur]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely the best movie I have seen my you thus far. The storyline was very original, I liked the mythical setting you had here. The graphics were very cool. You had lots of detail in the background, and always had good camera angles and close-ups. I never got bored with this as there was humor throughout the movie. My favorite scenes had to be the intro to the last fight, the cardboard clockfriends, and also the introduction to the real clockfriends. Great stuff, awesome movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could always use improvement. They were very good, but I think it's what stopped you from winning a daily award over Strangeclock's movie yesterday.

[the Estranged Family ep.1]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very good start to a series that I won't mind watching in the future, hopefully you keep the good stuff coming. There was a ton of humor in this, but of course the best part had to be while Junior farted while watching porn, then asking "Is that a baby?". Good stuff, strange. The mother said a lot of funny things, and the milk-man at the end was quite funny. The graphics were well done, good shading and animations throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like the voice overs. It just doesn't sound right, to not hear speakonia in my speakers. I guess I just have to adapt.

[Drunken and Rena: TSM]

K

^^Good Points^^
A collab dedicated to thesoulman. An interesting idea, and it turned out pretty decent. I liked the first part best, since it had a storyline with him shooting blams at crappy movies, which is pretty funny. The second part was cool since it was synced with the music. Both parts had good drawings and good music.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a little bit short. Each part of this was short, and when combined they didn't make too much either. You definitely should have had some more people working on this one.

Little-Rena responds:

If it was more people, it would no longer be Drunken and Rena, lol P:
That's the main point to remember, lol.

Anyway, thanks for the review :)

[dont look!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Decent graphics. The people you drew were kind of realistic looking. Not a bad set of drawings here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Basically, I agree with the last reviewer completely. The Addams Family isn't based on humor of people exploding, it's more witty and comedical. Also, the music was pretty terrible. The original theme is much better than that remix you chose. Also, the text was always way cut off by the edges of the screen.