FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Minefield]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the storyline doesn't seem to be too bad. Seems like if you have some good ideas it could have some decent events in it. The sound effects are good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This needs a lot of work graphically. Your drawings are very poor, and the animations are lacking a lot. You need to do some more detailed animations that are more realistic. Also, work on drawing some backgrounds to make up for this a little bit.

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Frenzy responds:

Thanks!

[Snarf's Dance Party]

K

^^Good Points^^
As far as movies with three MC's go, this one was pretty good. I actually thought the animations were pretty good, kind of funny even. The music was also unique. A swing tune instead of the normal raving music.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's a single frame, which I was pretty disappointed by. I was hoping that this would have something more to it in terms of storyline.

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[The Matrix Mayhem]

K

^^Good Points^^
Seeing how I'm a fan of the Matrix, this was pretty hilarious to me. It was great how you had a scene with pretty much every character from the movie. The best had to be Trinity, seeing you dressed up as her was just hilarious. Sad thing is it actually looked like her. Neo's acting was kind of similar to the actual movie, which was ironic, and the Keymaker scene was very funny. Great job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seems like you got a little out of character when you started breaking the monitor by saying, "I think I cut myself", but that was funny anyway.

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[Luis is an Animator...]

K

^^Good Points^^
Graphics were pretty good. I like the sketchy, artsy type drawings in this. An interesting submission.

^^Needs Improving^^
I couldn't hear a lot of the lyrics in this, possibly because they were just sung too low to really hear well. I didn't know at all what was going on in this movie.

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LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Cheers man!

I guess I should've boosted all the volumes. Or maybe you could boost the volume on your speakers?

Lyrics:
Luis is an animator
Who often gets the Newgrounds Daily Feature.
His animations are so pimp.
It seems to be a true passion!

But Luis...
Where's Murray the Monkey?
Please don't let him die...
You abandoned episode 2 repeatedly
And you almost made me cry.

(You made me cry...)

But today is July the 19th
So eat some cake (CAKE) and brush your teeth (TEETH)
I hope the coming year is good (good...)
And HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!

[Sherbert the Cat 3-1]

K

^^Good Points^^
A decent addition to the series. The storyline is a little odd and incomplete, but it still has a good feel to it. I will watch the continuation of this episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, his legs look like penises. It's not a big deal, but thought I should get it out there. This needs more going on. Some kind of communication for the cat to involve the viewer a bit more.

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Jonimator responds:

HAHAHA! now that you mention it his legs do look like penises. I'll eventually fix that.

[The Snowball Cartoon]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good movie by you. Even the preloader was pretty clever. So far the best I've seen from you graphically. You had animations throughout, even subtle stuff. The music was refreshing, and the storyline had some humor in it, which made this more fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs some more sound effects. If there were any, I didn't hear them because of the music.

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Jimtopia responds:

Yes well, I don't really like this cartoon, but I'm glad you did, thx for the review.

[Jimtopia Changes]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was actually pretty neat for me. It didn't really have the in-your-face comedy that I am used to here on NG, and you had to watch it a little more intently to enjoy it, which was cool. The music and sound effects were cool, and the storyline was original and pretty funny as well. Liked the pillow hands, funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
The movie moves a little slow you could have made it more interesting or a little shorter. Also, the graphics weren't too detailed either, but it doesn't really effect the movie.

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Jimtopia responds:

Woah, a good review, thx! I'm glad you thought it was funny, apparently a lot of people did. *Thinks about re-making it*

-Jimtopia