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[Fork 'n' Bobby Ep4]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very random movie, but parts of this were pretty funny, like the "Tintanik" scene. Decent drawings throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how there is absolutely no correlation at all between the different parts of this. Also, parts of this were just annoying, like the first few scenes and the last one, which was maybe a fake preloader? Stuff like that just brought the overall movie down.

[uss greenville]

K

^^Good Points^^
It looks like you at least put some effort into this movie. The graphics weren't terrible, you put some detail into your drawings at least. The music and sound effects were decent as well, and same goes to the storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
You may want to think of adding some voice overs to a movie like this, to make things a little more interesting. Also, you should not animate heads turning around if you aren't going to draw in three dimensions. It just looks weird.

[The Shadow Show]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was pretty decent, but even that was too loud and made it so I couldn't hear the voice.

^^Needs Improving^^
So its some poorly drawn black circle, with your voice trying to sound tough and disgruntled, well honestly you failed at trying to make this show seem "cool" or whatever you were going for. I had no idea what you were saying, from what I said above, and the animations were lack luster.

[The Urkle Collection]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked some of the music in this. The menus music was pretty good, and you had a good musical theme throughout. I thought the first part by six star was the best in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really not a great work by you two here. The graphics were poor, but aside from that, this wasn't even very funny. The jokes were just dry and this didn't entertain me.

[Clock Wrogn]

K

^^Good Points^^
I think yodd was right on when he said this is one of the best PW movies on NG, as most of them are incredibly unoriginal, but this one was much more interesting and pretty original at the same time. My favorite scenes had to be the first one with Rupee dancing to Moskau, and also, loved the scene with IIDX Clock (which I never knew existed, but is really awesome because IIDX is a really cool game).

^^Needs Improving^^
Didn't really like the scenes with the sound clips that you didn't make yourself. They brought down this array of original speakonia conversations.

KKyuubi responds:

About the mixed bag: I wanted this to be as close to the original idea of PW as possible, but the only way I could make this a "true" Clock movie, was to throw in some inside jokes (like Heavy Metal's insult line).

Also, there's hidden commentary too!

[Everytime We Touche]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ah, the sun mafia. I was hoping to see some kind of collab from this group, but this will do for now. The music was good. Intense and fast paced for a rave type movie like this. I liked the backgrounds and everything going on in this movie, such as the many different characters running through the background. Nice job. Great intro too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, it's only one frame.

[Minefield I]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline is developing in this episode, which is cool. It is a pretty interesting story. Not the best, but still worth watching. The sound effects and music were good throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
Basically what I said about the last episode. You need to add some more to this graphically. You should definitely draw some more backgrounds to make up for the pretty poor animations and drawings.

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Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks.

[Minefield]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the storyline doesn't seem to be too bad. Seems like if you have some good ideas it could have some decent events in it. The sound effects are good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This needs a lot of work graphically. Your drawings are very poor, and the animations are lacking a lot. You need to do some more detailed animations that are more realistic. Also, work on drawing some backgrounds to make up for this a little bit.

Review Request Club

Frenzy responds:

Thanks!