FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ScienceFiction]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was pretty nice graphically. You had some cool FBF animations and overall cool effect with the graphics. Characters looked nice, and looks like you spent some time on this. I liked the voice acting and the sound effects too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just an intro, which was disappointing, and it looped, which is always annoying. I would like to see a full version with this same care taken to make it.

[SO-DUH]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked this, it was kind of cute. It was cool how you made it seem like the shadowed can was a bad guy, but then you changed it all with the ending, which was kind of corny, but made me chuckle. You've got some good animating skill too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, a little corny for an ending, which I'm sure a lot of people won't really appreciate as much as I have.

petemanpeter responds:

Yeah, the whole point of it was to be stupid. Even I think it's corny, and I made it.

[Rotoscoping]

K

^^Good Points^^
Graphics weren't bad. I liked the animations in this, they were rather realistic looking, and the sound effects were pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Very short movie, with just random violence to make up the storyline, I wasn't very interested in this. I thought the drawings weren't that good, in fact they lacked a lot of detail to me. Not a great movie in my opinion.

Jackassboy responds:

thanks. im getting into this type of "animation" now. hopefully i can get better at this.

[Vote Or Die! (Smb)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Haha, a rather funny movie you made here. Having a South Park clip play and animated to SM sprites was rather unexpected, and you did a great job with the animation. The lip syncing was on pretty well, and I really thought it was cool how well you manipulated the sprites, and how you weren't afraid to do a lot of close in scenes.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...I would say you could improve on the black backgrounds. Perhaps added something other than just plain black.

Hydrogenic responds:

Thanks for that great review, I'll keep that in mind for my next flash

[How Badass is he? -T.L.L.]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty cool little short addition to supplement the regular series. It was rather funny some of the commentary the people gave, and the interview style of this was interesting to see. Quite funny to watch this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not too much animation in this one compared to the others. It was mostly just small stuff with just the text.

Review Request Club

Emptygoddess responds:

Or better yet. "Yes"

[The Legend of Link Part 4]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a fine conclusion to the series. I liked how it wasn't the average fight scene in there, and was mostly filled with humorous talking between the characters. Overall a pretty satisfying ending to the series. Good job on this one, I enjoyed watching it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall a very good series. But if you ever make another one, the only advice I have is to become familiar with the V-cam. Zooming in and moving the camera around will make the movies a lot more interesting.

Emptygoddess responds:

The V-cam is the work of lothar, demon goddess of the underearth. So i will not touch it.

[The Legend of Link Part 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another good episode added to this series. I thought the scenes in this were rather funny. They had humor in it that wasn't corny and it was rather fun to watch. The animations and sprite manipulation was cool, and overall this has to be my favorite of the series so far. The first scene was pretty hilarious.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't see why you had that big black box on the left side for the text. It just looked kind of awkward to me. And basically everything I've said for the previous episode goes here as well ;)

Emptygoddess responds:

Because the text would get angry if i did not. Once i tried not to and the letter T stabbed me over and over, leaving me just barely enough alive to finish.

[Half a collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
I kind of agree, that this got a rather low score for what was offered. The graphics were top notch as far as FBF animations go. I can tell you've had a lot of experience animating and had some fun making this one. There was lots of stuff going on, and lots of funny animations, especially that dancing guy that showed up every other scene. The finished collab looks like it will be a success if you keep up this work.

^^Needs Improving^^
What probably killed this the most was that there was no music in it. You definitely need some cool music along with a bunch of sound effects.

FlashKn1ght responds:

Well, the thing is my part of the collaboration was the 2nd half. My friend had the music.

BTW: The whole collab will come up soon, my friend just has to get his part ready, so the one on Newgrounds will be our "unrated" version, so to speak.

Thanks for the crit too, when I first started I got a ton of "You suck!"s

[subway boredom]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty cool movie. I liked the graphical style. You had neat character designs with some anime styles added in. The music was great, went well with the crazy storyline, which was rather unexpected.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, perhaps some more sound effects could help this out a bit, as it was mainly just music.