FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wee!]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't too bad in this. You did a decent job on the drawing of Link, and his facial expressions were pretty well made. I liked the music you used as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the joke wasn't that great, as its really unoriginal, and wasn't really funny the first time it happened. Honestly I was expecting a bit more from this.

[The Duders: Evolution]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics are slightly better in this episode. Decent voice acting as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A whole episode dedicated to the slight improvement of the graphics? I'm not sure they are even a whole lot different, but whatever. I wasn't too entertained by this for that reason, I think you should have worked a little more and had an actual storyline.

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TheCriminalDuder responds:

Yeah this didn't have a storyline at all really. Shorts really are just about randomness I think. This flash was more of a experiment to see how flash pro 8 works for me I think.

[The Duders: Emo Farm]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline wasn't too bad. It was a little bit funny just because of how random and strange it is, but I got some entertainment out of it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This submission was just really weird. First off, didn't really like the characters. The one had that really high voice, and the other talked like an idiot. The animations weren't great, try to work on them. You will get better though with more practice.

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TheCriminalDuder responds:

I'm practicing alot don't worry.

lol Thoughs were me and Jays real voices ouch.

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked this short. The introduction to it was pretty neat, and you changed the mood right after that, which was pretty funny. Liked the music, it was a great way to introduce the characters in this new series.

^^Needs Improving^^
The art wasn't very good at all. I wasn't too happy with you just having plain black backgrounds either. Having some type of background would have been much better.

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Jimtopia responds:

I was setting mood. And that mood was black. Lol, thx for the review.

[Fleep]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was really an interesting movie! I liked the sketched style, and drawing some of this in Flash, and the rest on paper. The flashed images were cool, and the music added to the abstract mood of it as well. I really like when the conversations started, as they made absolutely no sense, but it was really cool to see what came out of your head.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...just work on keeping your work consistent and keep working on it.

Beyond-Insanity-666 responds:

Thanks for the review, and I must say that I think this is my most "consistent" work to date as it was all done on models (if you will) so they were always in proportion. Maybe I'm just mis understanding you're useage of the word.
Chow for now.

[BBQBBM meets Mr. Global]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a half decent tribute to BBQ. I liked how you used the Windows 98 song clip in this, which was pretty funny. This looked like a true movie by BBQ also, which was kind of cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really nothing special about this though. The storyline wasn't very good, as you basically just gave up on storyline when you did the Windows 98 clip. That basically made me think a lot less of this movie.

Carbonwater responds:

K.

[transformed animals]

K

^^Good Points^^
Kind of interesting movie. I liked the music you added, that was cool. Some interesting graphical effects as well, and the ending wasn't bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall, animations need some work in my opinion. Also, you could have added a preloader or a replay button to this. It is always a little annoying when movies loop.